Reviews for The War Within
Guest chapter 10 . 7/5/2012
Have you ever considered going to a mental facility yourself...
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY chapter 10 . 10/27/2007
ok this was good but i didn't really get what happened in teh end?
Silent Figurine chapter 10 . 4/15/2007
Wow... 0_0 I think this story made me a bit more paranoid. I'll never look at DDR again without being disturbed... *starts to rock back and forth in a little ball* And the thing with Mrs. Johnson is just creepy...
Lisa chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Cheerful, great beginning, interested in knowing how it ends.
muwa chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
bleh! it was well written but u probably should have explained the time and place changes haha it gave me a headache trying to figure it out... ow head still hurts probably from lack of sleep though haha... ya i'm going to bed good story though and by a good i mean creepy beyond all reason lol
SnowFalls17 chapter 10 . 12/29/2005
so nice! so... undescribably unbelievable! A masterpiece! Bravo/a! I love it! Nice and excellent plot! _ continue your great job
MystiqueKami chapter 10 . 12/19/2005
i absolutely love ur stories and the twist in the ends of each one. i dont suppose u can write more can you? PLEASE WRIT EMORE STORIES!


BTW: i read ur profile and i love Kill Bill and Evanescence too! my favorite is Kill Bill vol. 1 though...
Sir Elliot chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Characters so acurate is was creepy
Aya Hinata chapter 10 . 7/24/2005
Wow, thats good. But nothing in here explain's WHY she killed Kyou. I just need to figure that out. Why why why why why why why why why why why -why wont that word leave me head now?- why why why why why why why why? -okay shutting up now... PLease do a FAQ at the end, There are os many things you didn't clear up. Anyways, I liked it alot, please continue to write more good fanfics. We can't have too many based on " Tohru being with Yuki or Kyou" there are thousands of those already here. Something new would prove wonderfull. Thank you for your time. _
SasukeBlade chapter 10 . 7/20/2005
Ooh! A chilling ending...very ironic, with the brightly colored case bit. That was creepy, how it was Mrs. Johnson who killed them all. And that Hatori got arrested, and that...well basically the whole thing was both interesting and disturbing. Anyway, great job!
Tahimik Panda chapter 10 . 7/20/2005
fantastic epilouge

kinda left like an ominous feeling bout wut Tai found the end

excellent story..good job writing it
Boohbahs eat children chapter 10 . 7/20/2005


That's even creepier! Mrs. Jhonson? No way! Hey, the man who sustained major it Kyo? is he STILL ALIVE AFTER ALL THAT?

Geez. I know he's my favorite, but if it's him, I'm gonna have to be angry with him for not being dead.

I'm sorry it took me so long to finish reading, I had fiddle camp and stuff.

It was awesome.
Phantom Tippy chapter 10 . 7/20/2005
*dies* This story (and the prequal) is amazing! Its my new favorite! It was soo unpredictable! I loved that, because some stories can just be so predictable! XD!
Monk of the Neko chapter 10 . 7/20/2005
A real COLD ending for Tai. Come on, he had to see a DDR Game that's to cold. Anywhy, good story keep up the good work.
Lucinda the Maid chapter 10 . 7/20/2005
...was it so wrong of me to laugh at the ending? A lovely conclusion to your two-parted story, if I do say so myself. You finally managed to kill off Tohru! And Tai had a happily ever after... maybe...

Here's hoping to see more from you in the "Furuba" fandom in the future! Ja!
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