Reviews for Say
ToastGirl10000 chapter 2 . 6/12
I loved the little ficlet. It literally made my parents come into the room to make sure I was ok. (I was making very inhuman noises, afterall) The best part was at the end "Who cares? It's not like this is canon." I think I love you now, btw. Anyways I have to go read your other fics, and get a latte. BYE!
joslyn.harris2 chapter 2 . 2/9
That was a perfect ending!
problemhunter chapter 2 . 1/26
I have to say that this is the. Best. Goddamn. Fanfic. Evah!

I am so glad that you exist!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Hahaha, this is one of the most wonderful parodies I've read on this website so far (2nd chapter, I mean) - and kudos on imbuing the ordinary interactions of Eragon and Murtagh with the deeper undertones I've always thought they had...you're a lovely writer! 3
Murtagh's Lady chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Brilliant!
I seriously don't get why so many folks ship Murtagh and Nasuada?! They don't love each other, right? And will never be together.
That's why I'm a die-hard EraMur fan, well in case of slash fanon. In canon, I ship EragonArya and Murtagh with another girl. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
Hahahahaha, that was beautiful. I'm a huge fan of Eragon and that made my day.
Pyre13 chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
I'd just like to say that the original fic was absolute heart wrenching. I adored it. There will never be enough of this pairing in the fanfiction world for my liking and most of it is written by terrible writers anyway. You are one of the few I've seen who can genuinely hold a plot together and put over the emotional attachment so well, without falling into the pit of just making it a really badly detailed porno.

I also, however, laughed myself out my chair at the second little fic-let, it was utterly hilarious, I know how annoying it can be with all the silly little girls throwing themselves in to the world, and it is infuriating. Surely as readers and writers, we choose these stories because we love them, and the characters, why try to utterly change them to the degree of which they are no longer even based in the canon in the slightest?1

Anyway, rant over... haha, thank you for simultaneously making my heart hurt for the boys, then making me cry with laughter.
Ginshi-chan chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
Loved the story and the crack-tastic ficlet. I like your line about "if you can write Mary-Sues I can write slash". I think that's my new favorite line against the haters out there. :)
WeAreTomorrow chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
Somewhere, a slash writer is rejoicing.

Correct: Somewhere a slash writer dies of hysterical laughter *then* rejoices.

God, that was exactly what I needed. Not only was this one of the absolute best Murtagh/Eragon fics that I've read, but your complete and utter thrashing of fangirls had be in tears.

Let me answer your questions, though. They don't comment on the writing or the story structure or the character's themselves because they know that there's really nothing to say. It was well written, not OCC and had that special little something that they lack...

Competence in the english language.

Anyway, I throughly enjoyed it and am off to read more of your work.
Nessya chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
I must say that unfortunately there isn't much on EragonxMurtagh, however your piece is very well built and is touching. I love how you can interpret each little gesture, in my opinion those matter the most giving you this sense of bittersweet-ness.

I think that such speaks louder than the most romantic gestures.

Also (smothered snickering) the second chapter, was very amusing! You are right, if 14 year old girls can log in and write the most generic cliché fanfiction stories ever, you can write your slash.

I have to say... I wish this carried on. Gah, not that I have looked for Eragonbx/bMurtagh goodness in here but I wish that there was a decent story about them, actual plot and well written.

Perhaps you could do it? (hint, hint)

Sorry if it's a bother :) But I really liked it!
Phoenix Soar chapter 2 . 6/1/2010
I loved your interpretation of their, er, in-between the lines stuff (sorry, can't really think of the proper word now -sheepish smile-)

In a way, I think it nicely explains why even I fell in love with the Murtagh/Eragon pairing when I first read Eragon. I didn't like Arya (Mary Sue; totally), so of course my mind rebelled against Eragon/Arya. And though I have nothing against Nasuada, the whole implied Murtagh/Nasuada thing just seemed too sudden for my liking. At least Eragon and Murtagh had a far more developed relationship. And this fic wonderfully shows how a more romantic aspect could be taken from their canon interactions!

I really really like this. I'm so chucking it in my C2 ;)

Well done and kudos to ya! :D

PS: Loved your Mary-Sue/Arya parody. You nailed the bad fanfics head on! xD
Joey Nightmare the Chocobo chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
Oh My Bloody God I love your story. The second chapter was funny. Iloved the part where the Aria? I don't know how to spell her name ? died. If you would please wright more Eragon/ Murtagh slash.

- Joie the Chocobo
jay chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
THAT IS HORIBLE! that (I think it looks like) is a romance between Eragon (who's in love with Arya) and Murtuge. Later on in book two they find out there brothers!

THIS STORY'S SICK!
Highqueen Julietta chapter 2 . 8/2/2009
rofl! oh i laughed so hard... )

"do we have lattes in alageasia?"- so perfect

this ficlet made my evening...

HQJ
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
aww, SO impressiv!

its amazing and unique... i love it!

rock on,

HQJ
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