Reviews for A Lovely Delirium |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Draco is very in character...especially in that last line. Awesome job. I'm awaiting you update at the end of the week... |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it starts off with a bang! You certainly know how to keep a reader coming back for more. I think if you wanted to become an author that rivaled JKR you wouldn't have to try to hard cuz this was brilliant. I love it when people use big paragraphs and actually care about their grammar. Three to four intellegent adault like sentences. Bravo on that. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this. I'll be reviewing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the whole thing on the community, and my! is it a work of art! |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny i like it you should continue -divs |
![]() ![]() I left a review at the exchange site, but I wanted to leave another one here. First, I am so sorry it has taken me so long to review but between being a full time college student in summer school, a part time worker and have no internet at home, I have had little time to do much lately. Second, I have to say that I was beyond happy, almost giddy when I discovered it was you who had written my fic. I absolutely love and adore valentine encounter. Thrid, I loved every minute of this fic. I even read it at two in the moring when I was suppose to be studying for my math test. I never thought that I could ask for a few simple things and end up with such a fantastic gift. Thank you so much. Jaiden's crush. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks very promising! I can't wait to read more of it... will Hermione be able to get out of here flying? :3 Mistery! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! Quite a lovely start. It has some great original qualities as well. I am looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() Wow! I'm soo excited about this new story! So I assume that Draco is going to turn into Ron or someone from his family. "Poverty tastes revolting." Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, wow. This looks good so far - and it was on a request, you said? Well, hopefully this week will go by quickly, so that I can read the next little bit. Cheers! xx Kya |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg great story! |
![]() ![]() You are one of the best writers on this site. I LOVE "Valentine Encounter"! This is also EXCELLENT. I love it. Cant wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! So Draco Malfoy has to be Ron Weasly for the next 12 hours! And on top of that...HE CANT TALK! lol That is too funny! haha Please please please update ASAP! This is so0o0o great! I love it! This is one amazing idea you have come up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good storyline! LOL! I just love the bickering! Oh i love Draco! Sigh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last line makes me laugh. Not that I don't love Ron, but the animosity between Draco and Ron is amusing. I can tell this is going to be a good story. -Erin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right, then! Cracking good start: Nice visual opening, no grammar mistakes, good characterization, great cliffie! Well, done! |