Reviews for A Lovely Delirium |
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![]() ![]() Oops meant to say necessarily in the last review. anyway, i loved this chapter. draco is getting a real insight into life from hermione's point of view. hopefully help comes soon! :) |
![]() ![]() Um i don't really like how you use parenthesis. i feel like if it's important enough to be in the story, then it doesn't need parenthesis. your sentences are also unnecissarily prolonged with dashes and semicolons. other than that i love the plot. |
![]() ![]() I absolutly LOVED this story from beging to end. It was great, but could have had more detail in the smut part of the story just to make the story a little more 'interesting'. Alot of people like the love sences in stories, but for what you did have writen was good. :3 I prefur yaoi if I'm going to read a love story, but this was a good change _ |
![]() ![]() Ry6edu7i8kswdf so suspenseful! |
![]() ![]() Love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! I had unshed tears through Hermione's Pensieve and I liked how Draco responded accordingly. Furthermore, I like all your stories - you are extremely talented and write well with all the correct syntax and those other annoying grammatical things :) Much love, CelestialEnchantress07 |
![]() ![]() ![]() o.m.g.! you almost got me at the end XD i really thought he didn't remember hell! lol i loved the way you made Draco fall for Hermione, seeing all her memories and all.. it's was refreshing from others :) see ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loveed this. heaps. got no more words sorry lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow amazing although it was just a few hours,their relationship doesn't seem rushed at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Loved the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I disagree that the romance seemed rushed. Yes, it was quick, but I think it understandable given the circumstances of their situation. I really like it overall. And I cried whole-heartedly at Alexander's funeral scene. That was powerful and and completely heart-wretching. Magnificent plot and great characterizations. Love your Draco, he's so true to canon personality-wise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez, where to begin? This was an AMAZING story. I am absolutely in love with the way you write, and I can't believe I haven't come across your work before. You have no idea how excited that I am, especially since this certainly isn't your only story. This story had a brilliant plot and I look forward to reading the rest of your work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're so good! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the best Draco and Hermione fic I've ever read. I don't really have any further comments... just, wow. |