Reviews for Immortali
HR chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
The following review has been submitted to: Immortali Chapter: 1

From: Stone Cold

A very nice viginette. Though you might want to call him Talyn John

and Moya John, that's pretty much what they've been dubbed in the Scaper


owaranai.natsu chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Ohmigod…John’s journal entries are amazingly beautiful, great job with that! I especially loved the debating between, him me, us…John Crichton/Aeryn Sun..but who’s who..great stuff:) I also loved how John walked in and read the last lines; that must’ve been a tough blow to Aeryn’s heart, considering he’s still alive…wonderful punch there. And most of all, I loved the ‘we’ll tumble through that wormhole when we get to it’ replacing ‘we’ll cross that bridge…’ awesome!:)
Cpt. Ritter chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
OH, dramatic... unfortunately, I haven't seen that part of the series yet!