|Reviews for Spirits of the Dead|
| digimaniac-falkor3 chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
dm: ash and misty itsumademo!
Nuriko: they might not even bring misty into this story.
dm: point taken. if you bring misty in, then. okay, onto the other questions...
1. so far, kris does not seem to be a mary sue. actually, she seems like an interesting character.
2. i dunno. i have no idea where this story is headed. erm...id like her not to die, hows that?
3. this is a good story. id love to read more, if you update.
4. the story line is definitely intriguing.
5. there does not seem to be any mary sue-ness at all in this story yet.
6. did may faint earlier? i was just a little confused at that point.
dm: there ya go. filled with responses to your questions. oh, by the way, on the couples note, aside from misty and ash, gary and kris would be interesting. ciao!
| Turnip the Scribe chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
- This is interesting. I will enjoy reading the next part! Oh, and as for couples, if possible, I would say Misty and Ash. May is way too young. It's so wrong that some people think that Ash should be with a little kid. It's just creepy. But, still. I like ghost stories.
| Kidate chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
OH! AAM! ASH AND MISTY! THERE ARE *WAY* TO MANY GUYS THAT LIKE MAY. AND *ASH* SHOULDN'T BE ONE OF THEM. GO ASH AND MISTY!