Reviews for Center of the Universe
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
A bit too repetative but, an interesting take
FangirlIssues31 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
This makes me smile every single time I read it, this was heartbreaking, sweet, wonderful, clever and gorgeous all at once. I loved it SOOO FREAKING MUCH! You're great! I can't believe how accurate this is, thank you.
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
Nice
Mad Zia Magdalena chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
TT . TT This is pretty heartbreaking, not going to lie.
Great job! Very well-written, melancholy, and interesting. Was the "center of their universe" line supposed to be an allusion to Ichigo's mom or just a clever choice of words?
C. L. Kellen chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Byakuya and Hisana are one of my favorite pairings in Bleach! This story is really cute and I like how you implied that it was either Renji or Ichigo that was going to end up with Rukia and not set on a specific pair!

Keep up the good work! :)
sallythedestroyerofworlds23 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Beautiful :')
great gospel chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Beautiful, just beautiful. The depth and perception found in this piece was just incredible. One of my favorite Bleach fics. :)
Lutralutra chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
So beautiful. I loved your language - all the wonderful, different adjectives you used to describe those "hot-headed, warm-blooded, loud-mouthed young boys", Byakuya and Rukia and those worlds - they were perfect. You managed to make Byakuya sound very human but not OOC, and I think you painted an accurate, beautifully poetic picture of what he thinks of Rukia and Hisana.

This made me feel sad and touched, because Byakuya's intelligent and perceptive and I think he's right - someone's going to end up hurt, and maybe it'll be Ichigo or Renji or Rukia or all of them, and maybe it won't ever be okay. But your writing made me feel the power of memories and moments that can't ever be gotten back or taken away, and I think, hope, know it'll be all right.

Thank you so much for this; it made me feel something rarely felt, and I remember why I like fanfiction so much all over again. :)
VGirl chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
The best stories are semi-sweet with a heaping of personality. Thus, yours are among the top.
Blueezy chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
wow...poetic and hyper-depressing...

i'd like to believe hisana loved byakuya back but the way you wrote of their relationship is enjoyably bittersweet...

and poor renji&ichigo...
IVIaedhros chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Poor guy...
Silindro chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I wonder what kind of person Byakuya was back when he had his wife. I imagine that he was a more gentle person, but we'll never know.
HardlyFatal chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
This was fantastic. Your characterization of all of them is spot-on, and Byakuya's introspection about Hisana is heartwrenching. Thanks for a great story.
O f f beat chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Wonderful piece. I love Bya-kun's characterization in this! You really pulled it off well.
Chakura chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Cute, a tad repetitive the same thing of how he should warn them but won't and so forth but its a cute fic nonetheless
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