Wow, that was great! A very touching story on how Mirage sees their relationship.

Oh, this is gorgeous. Well done. I love how Syndrome sounds less like a man who has just hit a woman, and more like a child who has hurt a pet very badly. Sends shivers.

so-so sad...yet so good...i liked this fic...write more!

poor mirage

Thsi is personally the best story I have read in a while. But for some reason it seems to dark to be in sync with the Incredibles great job with it

that was an awsome story. very good I loved it

oh please write more! It was so awesome, it's beyond words to describe it. Please, write more! I'm begging you!

Wow. An IC Syndrome/Mirage story that's not sappy but is still sweet. Nice!

Thanks for your review of Girl's Girl.

Wow, how I wish I could write like you. :) This was fantastic! You should definitely expand this somehow.

By the way, thanks for all the advice you've given me on my story. I'm going to send you an email, too.

~~oP

Must fav!

Wow... my God, you put together a scenario that makes perfect sense and is absolutely fascinating, and on top of that, you can actually write. Amazing, amazing work. If inspiration keeps striking, then please keep writing! This fan would be glad to read!

So true.

That was very good; an interesting, well-written little idea. Good job.