Reviews for Quiet Moments in the Dark
snarky Beth chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wow, that was great! A very touching story on how Mirage sees their relationship.
Harmonic Friction chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Oh, this is gorgeous. Well done. I love how Syndrome sounds less like a man who has just hit a woman, and more like a child who has hurt a pet very badly. Sends shivers.
Smile XD Widely chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
so-so sad...yet so good...i liked this fic...write more!

poor mirage
Deception King chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
Thsi is personally the best story I have read in a while. But for some reason it seems to dark to be in sync with the Incredibles great job with it
PoodlesandNoodles chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
that was an awsome story. very good I loved it
Gremblin chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
oh please write more! It was so awesome, it's beyond words to describe it. Please, write more! I'm begging you!
Katarik chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Wow. An IC Syndrome/Mirage story that's not sappy but is still sweet. Nice!

Thanks for your review of Girl's Girl.
SirenFoxx chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wow, how I wish I could write like you. :) This was fantastic! You should definitely expand this somehow.

By the way, thanks for all the advice you've given me on my story. I'm going to send you an email, too.

Artist Of Akatsuki chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Must fav!
Firestone2 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wow... my God, you put together a scenario that makes perfect sense and is absolutely fascinating, and on top of that, you can actually write. Amazing, amazing work. If inspiration keeps striking, then please keep writing! This fan would be glad to read!
Sayiangirl chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
So true.
Michi chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
That was very good; an interesting, well-written little idea. Good job.