|Reviews for HMS Paradise|
| simsfans chapter 4 . 2/5
Update soon please
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/20/2014
| insanity and co chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
This can SOOOO not be the end! Please pick it back up!
| insanity and co chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
Just throwing more reviews at you. :) Cause I like this. And cause it's cute. And cause I'm a sucker for Iruka and Kakashi.
| insanity and co chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
So cute! I can't believe you thought of calling Rock Lee "pebble". XD
| insanity and co chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Oh, I absolutely LOVE this! :) It's so corny but adorable.
| ActuallyNevis chapter 4 . 5/26/2011
This is hiliarous. Too bad it was abandoned? Alas! Maybe oneday you'll come back to it! ;-)
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/5/2010
I was reading this to my sister, then I got to the end
. Why must you torture us with your unfinished
| Sejitsu chapter 4 . 9/9/2009
*dying of laughter* This is beyond epic. I really, really, really hope you continue it, because it's probably the funniest KakaIru fic I've ever read and I desperately want to read more. XD Please! *begs* All the references are ridiculously funny, and the narration is priceless. Great job!
| Catof'thaDune88 chapter 4 . 6/29/2009
"they're actually intended as some sort of weapon." isn't all b rate porn a deadly weapon? lol, joke aside love the ur fic!
| Lolchen chapter 4 . 5/2/2009
This. is. crazy. Totally insane, even. I love it, it's always good for a good laugh. Yarr. Kinky. *giggles*
And Jiraya will take over the ninja world! With his books! His ultimate secret not-so-secret weapon! Go, Jiraya! XD
| Anyjen chapter 4 . 9/2/2008
That was wonderful. Pity there hasn't been any more since 2006...
Oh well. If ever you two decide to write more, I'll be here to read it. :)
| Anyjen chapter 3 . 9/2/2008
Wonderful, wonderful! Man, I'm laughing so hard I think I'm asphyxiating. XD
"Yes, but if you hear any tiny screams, it's the sound of brain cells dying."
There are no words to describe how wonderful this sentence is. XD
| Anyjen chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
I still have three chapter to read, but so far I find this absolutely hilarious.
I love how Very Badly Written the story is, with only vague pretences at plot and very corny descriptions in typical smutty-book fashion.
I can only imagine Iruka's face having to read that kind of story aloud.
My favourite line so far?
"He was wearing skin-tight leather pants which showed off his incredible...assets. The assets were very assety"
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. XD
| Uma Thermus chapter 1 . 8/16/2008