| Reviews for The Walk |
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   twlightbella chapter 8 . 4/8/2017 Aww she ha d the twins |
| twlightbella chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 Bridget and eric are engaged and having twins |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/20/2013 pheww... for a second i thought he was cheating on her! |
| tiaragirl1211 chapter 2 . 12/31/2010 not good. at all. it's GREAT. really great |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 8 . 1/12/2009 This chapter was very good! Best I've read out of all eight I'd have to say. Yes, it was a bit long, but I enjoyed every second reading it because the chapter was so well written that I got carried away in it almost like I was right there! I love it! I love all of your work, it's simiply amazing! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 7 . 1/12/2009 Omg! Eric missed the babies being born! That's horrbile, but I love it anyway! Lol. At the end when Eric saw Bee and Naughty kiss, my heart started pounding! It was a very great chapter, I loved everything about it! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 6 . 1/12/2009 One again, I'm not ecaxtly sure how to give this chapter criticism... It was well thought out it seems with good detail. Once again, I loved all of the communication. Great work! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 5 . 1/12/2009 Amazing! You have me now wondering if Bees' stress is going to cause prematurity for the babies and how the birthing is going to go because of Erics' dream. This story is taking my mind in many directions of possibilities of what is going to happen next. I'll have to say, this is my faviourite story I've ever read! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 4 . 1/12/2009 Loved it alot! I'm actually getting carried away while reading this and ignoring my parents telling me to get off, lol. This (And the others I've read) chapter is amazing! I love how it seems that Bee and Eric can tell each other anything and understand eachother greatly. Great work! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 3 . 1/12/2009 I don't even know how to give this any criticism..Hnoestly, I love your writing to death already! I love how the paragraphs arn't very long and there's alot of communication between characters. The discripition seems to be faded though now, but it's not worrying me. You're a talented writer and I can't wait to read more! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 2 . 1/12/2009 Oh my! This was such a great chapter ! I wish it was longer but since there is 9 chapters in total, I have nothing to worry about :) Lol. Hm. Actually thinking about it, there's nothing I didn't like about it! It was all wonderful and I liked how you added the other characters into it. Very excellent! |
| xXXx FromFiction xXXx chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 I felt that this story was very discriptive and seemed as if it was well thought out. It's the type of story that I would look forward to finding out more about Alicia and Eric Jr when they grow older: This would make a GREAT bundle of chapters that I would really enjoy reading. All in all, this was a really great chapter! |
| Carla2013 chapter 2 . 5/2/2008 good good |
| soundedlikefootsteps chapter 6 . 2/16/2008 hey great story so far! but, in this chapter, you said that she was making waffles for him, and then a second later, she gave him pancakes... i don't get it... can you R & R my stories please? hooked-on-harry |
| NaleyBrucasFan - aka Lizzy chapter 9 . 1/4/2008 PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY! IT'S SUCH A GREAT PLOT AND YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL! I really really really really wish that you would right more! |