Reviews for Shine
Sage347 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Wow. Just freakin' wow. You did a great job. XD

Definite fav.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
"Try prancing around Paris in a little tiny leotard in the cold just to get a carton of milk."

"Sorrow filled those beautiful peepers"

Three things:

1. They didn't have cartons of milk, they had bottles, and they were delivered to homes/buisnesses ect. One simply didn't buy milk at the market places.

3. Ballet rats had other clothes besides tutus and practice clothes. They did actually own dresses, (mind you, they weren't brocades of silk and expensive lace, but they were dresses none-the-less) Marguerite Giry would never run out in the winter, in a LEOTARD to fetch milk, and or any other grocery.

3. Never. NEVER are Erik/Meg/Christine/Raoul/any phantom character in GENERAL's eyes ever referred to as "peepers"
VetiosusSerpens chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Oh please keep going! This is so good! I love how she volunteered to help clean up the mess, that's so cute! And the bit about the morphine, are you going to incorporate some of Susan Kay's Phantom? I think that would be awesome. Anyway, keep up the good work and please post some more soon, I really really want to know what happens.
Ribbon chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Lovely!_ Keep up the good work!