|Reviews for My Heartbreak, My Heartbeat|
| X.Devils-Sweetheart.X chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Damn, I can barely see what I am typing now, because I am crying so much. But really beautiful story. x
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!
| music-and-fairytales chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Absolutely beautiful. Seriously. I love it. Amazing work! x
| restless-mess chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Wow! Great Job. I loved the range of emotion here, you write wonderfully. Keep it up :)
| Hopeless Romantic chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
Oh no, this didn't suck at all! Very, very much enjoyed! I'll be seeking out more of your work most definitely!
| Steeldust-01 chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
" A moonbeam caught sight of a pistol in your hand. I think my heart stopped. Did you hear it? "
At this line my heart missed a beat ... again a wonderful
story and the ending is perfect.
| csiAngel chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Oh! Perfect! :-)
I think my heart stopped beating as I read about the night on the beach; and I almost cried when she did. That was a remarkable scene!
And the second part was a great post-ep for "what you see is what you see", and the ending was... perfect :-)
I love how you used the two lines about her heart shattering/racing. Very effective!
| The Madhatter2 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Hey, that was cute. Yay for Stella being the greatest friend there is! :P The ending wasn't horrible at all. I'm glad that Mac wasn't overly sappy as some have made him out to be. I liked it. Very good job!
| weirdtaste chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
it sucked, not.
| Kavi Leighanna chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
With end notes like that (all pessimistic) I have no choice but to tell you that it didn't suck. Not one bit. However, I do wish it would have been slightly longer, just because there was so much more you could do with this. Anyway, I still liked it very much because it really captured the close friendship between Mac and Stella.
| raingarcia022 chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
I read this a while earlier, but my computer went crazy on me before I got to write a review. Anyway, I loved the scene at the beach, and the intensity of Stella trying to save Mac's life. I like how that was played out.
Oh, and am I ever glad that a MacStella fanfic came out. We've been getting pelted by D/A or F/A fics lately. Not that I don't mind, but hey, gotta return to the original ship. ;)
| LuvsDelkoSpeed chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Beautiful. My favorite story I've read so far. I liked it because it's dark. I love dark stuff.
I hope you continue to write in the future!
| Ill.be.your.ALWAYS chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
i loved the story! it was great! finally some one else who's a mac/stella shipper. we definately need more of those! keep up the good work!
| liz chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
ah, the end made my heart happy, because there are only so many angsty mac/stella fics i can handle! loved it!
| wezyjugz chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
I really loved this story and i can't wait for your next.