i can't take this anymore. there's a point where you escalate to lethality, specially in law agencies or worse paramilitary international operatives, and kara has been provoking everyone around for years to put her down.

The whole not kill thing was preachy in cartoons, understandable and internally consistent, but when you bring this kind of real world horror in, but try to keep the ideal? its jarring.

She displays narcissistic tendencies, and is a complete nutcase. I tire of her.

You also fundamentally misunderstand the honor system with how you portrayed Shia. It made her come across as dumb or even childish instead.

You really need to put a sexual assault/r ** trigger warning at the rope for the ice cube part that made Shego scream. That’s super disturbing. “Insane” and “psychopath” are very tropy, generic terms for this behavior- really shitting on people who have mental health issues with those descriptors. Kara’s definitely a narcissist and I can say from past experiences all someone needs is narcissism and a victim complex to be violent.

I really, really hope that wasn't Kara in the last scene. That would just be too cliched and annoying. Then again, it did feel weird for you to put so much detail into the wounds Shego gave her, only to immediately (finally) kill her off. Oh well.

Good god, I don't know if I've ever encountered a more annoying character than Kara Fang. She needs to hurry up and be dead.

I love this story with the all the heart I can manage for a piece of wrting. I've stayed up night after night, losing sleep just for this fantastic story. That summary does not completely capture this story's amazingness. I can't believe I got invested in OCs, I usually don't like OCs but almost all of the characters are so fleshed out and nicely written. I'm so glad you've taken the time out of last decade to whip up an amazing story as this. All I wish for this decade, besides for good fortune and yours as well, is if you could update this story's sequel. Preferably until it's finished, cause come on, it's been years! Both this and the other story's been sitting here for ages collecting dust as time seems to travel on. As of me writing this right now, I'm on the second chapter of the sequel. And for the sequel, there's only 3 chapters posted, which made my heart sink and crash into a million pieces. I couldn't believe articulate and gorgeous writings were just left here. No post 2010 update either! It's 2020 and I might actually cry from never knowing what comes for this universe you've created. I can only imagine, and it pains ever so deeply. I really hope that you're alive and well, with internet access as well so that maybe one day you'll log back into this account and finish up what you've started all those years ago. I can never see my decade complete without this series being as well.

I sincerely hope you're doing okay. This story really was one of the best reads i've ever had on this fanfiction website, and I swear on everything for that.

This was amazing! On to the next story!

Dude, you're messed up. But I guess I am too, because I absolutely love this. Booyah and all.

I mean, I love AU's and fluff and all that, but once in a while it's nice to also have something like this.

Why must you torture us so?

Last three chapters? Going by the number 25 on the description, I'm going to call bullsh it.

This has got to be one of the best, if not the best, fanfic I have ever read. The way you write each and every one of the characters is spot on, you can differentiate them all just by how they talk and think! The story line was great, however, a few chapters towards the end of this story felt like it was just dragging on and never going to resolve itself when it came to Shego having to find and obtain the cure for Kim. But I'm glad I didn't feel that for too long.. I truly did enjoy this story though! By far one of the best.

Every spare moment I had, I was reading this fic!

Your descriptions of events and everything you put into this story was absolutely fantastic! You are a very brilliant writer!

Anyone who isn't sure to read this fic, you really do have to give it a chance because this is a really great fic and you won't regret it!

very well written if not overly hashy with the events, also inconsistencies in chapters such as James being Johnathan for multiple chapters and Jasmine's hair color going from white to dark. and other things here and there that if read through could be easily fixed. I very much have enjoyed it overall considering it's small flaws.

Loved it... need more.

its really a shame u never went into shia and jasmines story honestly u couldve had a whole story on how they met and the kidnapping then past this event. it wouldve been awesome

This is a good read but too many flashbacks retelling the story again and again even though it's from a different characters.

interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapters.

-C.H.