Reviews for Portrait of the Soul
Child of Dreams chapter 29 . 2/21/2016
Um, I'm pretty sure it's Dimitri, not Demetree.
Pineapple3000 chapter 15 . 12/22/2015
like a true french man is soooo much better than 'and he french-kissed her'
Pineapple3000 chapter 14 . 12/22/2015
oh you did it again! "Where is she?" "Oh, her? Yeah, she's in my torture chamber. No biggy."
Pineapple3000 chapter 9 . 12/22/2015
very clever. I laughed during the whole pronoun game mix-up.
Pineapple3000 chapter 3 . 12/22/2015
Oh lol. When I read the "What do you think? Like it? Hate it?" I thought it was Mia who'd left a note with her sketch.
CharitinaX chapter 3 . 1/22/2015
Oh, and I know it might be hard/bothersome to do so now when the story is already complete, but if you ever decide to edit this story one day, there are a few spelling mistakes (mainly phonetic misspellings).

In addition, I suggest that you make longer (and therefore, less) chapters instead of a lot of short-ish chapters. I'd much rather read a 20-ish chapter story with long and meaningful chapters than short ones, divided based on singular events (I guess what I'm trying to say is that up to where I am now, you don't really include multiple points of view in one chapter).

Also, it'd be nice if you could bold and/or insert a line break between your A/N's and the story, just so that it's easier for readers to distinguish what's going on. (True story: I read halfway through your author's note and thought it was what the main character was thinking first, before I finished the sentence and realized it was actually an author's note.)

CharitinaX chapter 2 . 1/22/2015
I've never read the Kay adaption, but was there ever actual evidence, which suggested that Erik had ever been given a bride in Persia? I know at least one version of the story suggested that he was about to be executed there, which is why he left...
RememberEdge chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Do you mean Monsieur?
As in, like, French "Mister" or "Sir"
Guest chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Oh god, that was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read.
shika93 chapter 41 . 11/30/2013
Wow, aw awesome ending and story! Fantastic! Awesome!
shika93 chapter 40 . 11/30/2013
Wow, good chapter!
shika93 chapter 39 . 11/30/2013
Awwwww, great chapter!
shika93 chapter 38 . 11/30/2013
0o0..great chapter!
shika93 chapter 37 . 11/30/2013
Good chapter! : ]
shika93 chapter 36 . 11/30/2013
Ha, good chapter!
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