|Reviews for Sempre Com Irmao Always With My Brother|
| coolcat12345 chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
Oh so awesome and heartwarming. This is beautiful fic and deserves sequel. I think it would be better if you had chapter for each day, but this is too more than ok! I am interested,did he add Yoh in picture? However, you mentioned fire being Hao's element, but he only uses it because it's most destructive and having it's spirit strenghtens it's potency, he can at will control all of them. I imagine this being part of anime and I almost cried when I remembered end. Part when Hao takes Yoh's well in mouth is great, he is controlling even in that position, but Yoh thankfully fast takes his deserved role of uke! That minor lake spirit is interesting, you mentioned in passing it's female, and then for some reason I started shipping her and Spirit of Fire. Please do sequel, Shaman King anime with this as canon events and how Yoh and Hao interact, and please don't have anybody find out ( and if it's not problem, add in above mentioned lake spirit, I think she is cute.).
| Deny7747 chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
It's very cool till now! ;)
| sousie chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
| Cutiebeary chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
Well, it took me 2 hours( or more, I lost track of time) to read it, and I most say, you totally surprised me.
great story, flawlessy writing and amazing everything. I adored the humor in the story and Yohs slacking off nature :)
| speisy chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
A very nice. It's a pity that it seems it isn't complete. I think it could have been an awesome story. Thanks for story though. You're a good writer
| PurpleSong chapter 2 . 10/4/2013
So beautiful, dark and kinda heart warming
| QuinnSilver chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
This was truly amazing. I loved it.
| Sakura chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
This the best HaoYoh fanfiction that has ever been written. Period. I just couldn't get enough of this that I read it underneath my desk in class, non stop. I once thought that fics with long chapters where my worst nightware because no matter how well written they were, they bored the hell out of me. But this. This simply read itself. Not only that, you managed to capture their personalities and blend them in the story perfectly. A first-rate yaoi with a plot worthy of praise. Seriously, I can't thank you enough for sharing this with us :)
| IndigoPhantom chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
This fanfic still remains to be my favorite even it has been 7 years since the first time I read it. To be honest I've read it through 3 times already and it still has its perks! You are really AWESOME!By the way, may I translate it into other language and share with my friends? Of course I will credit you as the original author and provide the link here so that more people will come and read this wonderful fanfic.
| pikachu2510 chapter 2 . 3/9/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY, ITS SOOO GOIN ON MY FAV'S XD u said how u thought this story was much longer than u thought, buh im glad n i like long stories, wen i got close 2 the end i was like "NOOOOOOO!" buh i totally think that u could have made this story wayyy longer XD... like makin a sequel n continuing it would b a good idea rite i wanna c wah happens durin the tournament... buh i hoped that Hao was more sympathetic, caring, and felt guilty 4 some of the stuff he did, buh either way, this story was AWESOME!
| FreedomFallenStar chapter 2 . 12/28/2011
Wow just Wow
I WAS LAUGHING LIKE A MANIAC AT ALL THE FUNGA FU FU PARTS :P LOOOOOOL
| Sovereign Violette chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
This was... amazing. I haven't read a more talented written piece of Shaman King or most other anime/mangas. You're talented, Shinigami Yumi. I am truly very happy to have read your story! I look forward to more stories!
| Hahp Ends chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
This was epic. I can only hope there will be a sequel, no mater how unlikely.
| Crystal Mizuka chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
So, somehow or another, a friend of mine found this story and decided to link me to it since I happen to be an avid supporter of this pairing. Suffice it to say, I thoroughly enjoyed the reading experience. _
| kuriqa chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
oh my gods! this story was just soooo epic! it was very well done, though the lemon in it had a very... obscure and cold feeling... which i guess is ok, since that's how yoh felt about it anyways... and i love how yoh's afraid of mice that's just precious... but i have a question, what does funga fu fu mean? and omj when i got to the bit about the marmalade i had to laugh so hard cuz i didn't realize it until then either