|Reviews for Immortality|
| BoredomIsAnUnderstatement chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE! *gasp* there! i said it! now, DO AS YOU'RE TOLD! lolz! XD
| Creative Spark chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Robin a villan that's just not right!
| Wandering the Arid Sea chapter 2 . 1/25/2006
Really great story and nice take on the characters .Plz
update soon with more twists and turns .
| psycicflower chapter 3 . 11/11/2005
i'm a catholic, irish if that makes a difference some people seem to think we're all holy over here, and didn't find it offensive but then again i'm not exactly a devout catholic. I can see and understand why some may have found it offensive and i can understand why you changed it. the change didn't take away from it though you can still clearly see how it still resembles raven and still makes these killings pretty creepy. Don't worry about making changes, i know i do it all the time, and it only really matters that you're happy with the story, afterall you're the author.
anywho i'll be looking out for the next chapter
| Kazzy103 chapter 3 . 11/5/2005
Very good... I like this one better, though, not saying that you're other ending wasn't good. It is still very dark... filled with angst. I can't wait to read more. You've started this out really well, it's suspensful, has confusion added to it, and alot of annticipation. So... I assume that the 'him' the titans are talking about is Robin? Did thy kill him? I'm only guessing this because of what Slade said... "Immortality's not that bad." Once again well written. Please update soon! :)
| realfanficts chapter 3 . 11/2/2005
Well, I thought it was good. Really tense, but good. I still don't see Robin as a murdurer, but, like always, I suppose you will have an explanation?
| Saeran-Iarbhean chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
woah...that was BRILLANT! I LOVE IT!
| Insanity 101 chapter 2 . 11/1/2005
just read the revised addition, and my personal opinion was that it was a lot better. the antichrist aspect seemed like something that could come or go fairly easily without damaging the story, and, though i love your stories and would read anyway, felt better about this version. i hope you didnt think i was trying to preach or anything, just my thoughts. i was pretty sure that you were christian, what with that one chapter in face to face...when i said the chapter was "yicky" and "dark" those were compliments lol. reading the review over i realized they could have been taken otherwise. looking forward to any update, ~Dusty
| PHAOE chapter 3 . 10/31/2005
oh, this is wickedly creepy. very well done. looking forward to the why behind all of it.
i hadn't heard of the connection between raven's fate and the antichrist before (and admittedly, i didn't know much about the antichrist, so i googled it), but i think that likeness is a good one.
| Saeran-Iarbhean chapter 3 . 10/31/2005
wow that was good and creepy it gave me the shivers so robbo's evil now eh? i just knew one of these days it was going to happen anyways keep up the good work
saluting to you (dear gosh i sound like alexandru)
| Insanity 101 chapter 3 . 10/31/2005
:S yickity yick. LOL. hmm...it was mildly offensive, me being christian and all but...yeah, not horribly bad. this was (obviously) incredibly dark, but hey, still horrifyingly interesting. :S poor robin...but at the same time, i hate robin...gah im so confused. are you still gonna do my challenge? ...just curious. todays the deadline you know lol. its ok if you dont, only like...six ppl responded anyway. sorry i havent been able to read your other stuff yet, but i want to and im working on it. have a good day! lol. :Dusty
| psycicflower chapter 3 . 10/31/2005
Wow great chapter, very creepy. robin goes bad in a big way. and killing people to symbolise his friends, he really is, to put it one way, pretty sick in the head. Can't wait for the next chapter,
| White Witch chapter 3 . 10/30/2005
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Though, I would like to know a little more about the Titan's opinions on the whole 'Cyborg killing Robin' thing. I'm guessing that Cyborg and Raven saw it as the appropriate action to take, the other two didn't. Or something like that.
| Loony Dagda chapter 3 . 10/30/2005
OMG that was awesome. The whole thing with the victims looking like members of the Teen Titans is perfect. Is that some kind of revenge or is it some kind of psycho thing where whenever he sees soeone who reminds him of them he just feels like killing them. Or is Slade actually behind this. And also is Robin going to be an out and out villain this entire story or are you going to have him start regreting what he's been doing. I really can't wait to find out. I look forward to reading your next chapter, and I hope you update Scars of the Past soon.
| psycicflower chapter 2 . 10/30/2005
didn't see that new chapter but i guess your better off posting something you think is good. I'll keep an eye out for it.