|Reviews for Within you, Without you|
| Mizookie chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
Ooohhhh. It's miria trunks. I read the first story and hated it cause trunks didn't get gohan but I calmed down now that it was miria trunks. I love him but I love present Trunks more. It's weird cause trunks is my obsession but fuck it.
| Pikkorosan Daisuki chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Um... I really kinda wish you'd added to your warning that this series could potentially make people hella depressed... I read the whole "For the Love of Gohan" thing, which was depressing from the beginning, but I kept thinking it would be fixed, and all would be ok. The very end was hopeful, but not happy. I thought, okay, well then they'll patch everything up and be happy in the sequel. Then this one had to start out like... like... well, like it did. And... nothing really happened... 8 chapters of both the main characters being miserable. All the characters around them being miserable. Are you depressive or something? It made me really sad. I read some Piccolo series called "Aces Wild" from the humor section, which effectively cheered me up, but I never would have read this if I'd been warned that it would have made me feel like crap. No offense to your writing ability, there was nothing wrong with how it was written, just the story itself... I'm not into sad stories, and I didn't know. *sob*
| Demivolte chapter 8 . 1/18/2005
why? ;-; why so many years without an update? This fic is great, and i need to read an ending! If not, i'll need to create my own...hmm...I'll think about it for a while now...
But please, UPDATE!
| Xiilnek chapter 8 . 1/14/2005
... Why havn't you updated in years?
| Xiilnek chapter 3 . 1/14/2005
I don't recognize the name - I've only had acces to the dubbed version of the T.V show. Who is that? 17, maybe?
| Dersonally Chosen chapter 8 . 1/24/2004
HELLO! Wha happened to this story! I need an ending! I NEED ONE NOW! I read the For the Love of Gohan and NOW I'M IN LOVE! Please keep writing :'(
| LIME chapter 8 . 10/21/2002
OMG I LOVE THIS FIC, WHY IS PICCOLO DEAD AND COULD YOU HURT CHICHI MORE WHAT A BIACH MWAHAHAHAH
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
please keep writing ...need to know what happens
| Cabbitshivers chapter 8 . 7/17/2002
This fic is brilliant, just like its predeccesor which I read a few years ago when first riding the wave of the Piccolo/Gohan pairing. Needless to say, after reading "For the Love of Gohan", the first chapter of "Within You, Without You" left me shocked and reeling. Just what the hell had happened during that relatively small amount of time between my reading "For the Love" and the first part of "Within" to warrant... iie, to make Piccolo dead? I just couldn't for the life of me figure out how this fic could possibly be a sequel when one of the main slashy-guys is deceased. I'm overwhelmed to discover that it is better than I could ever have hoped. The depth and range of your visualisation while progressing through the chapters so far has stunned me, and I am gnawing at my fingers for more. You must sate my craving for this fic, sate everyone's cravings! If the inspiration is hard-coming, stare at the ceiling in your bedroom just before drifting off to sleep and see what comes. Then hope to the gods you remember in the morning, (or actually had the energy to sit up and write it down before completely nodding off.) It will not sit well with me or a great deal of others if this fic is not completed... even if it takes you YEARS. One day, I expect to search for this fic and find it sitting here in its entireity. If it isn't... well, I'm going to have a lot of space in my memory reserved for nothing. A waste, wouldn't you say?
Keep writing. The words sit well with you, and your style is enthralling. If you can't already tell, I'm in awe of this fic.
| sumsum chapter 8 . 6/12/2002
wow. I like it! But you must continue on. I mean, I want to know more about Pic-chan's death, and of course I NEED to know more about the andriod and Trunks. *nod nod* yep yep. Need more. So, you better finish. Or else...
| animegrrrl chapter 8 . 6/11/2002
I DON'T UNDERSTAND! ARE WE GOING TO SEE AN ENDING TO THIS STORY OR NOT! AAAAGGGHHH!
| Hotaru chapter 8 . 4/26/2002
Tomo! I LOVE THIS STORY! Pllllleeeeeeeeeease write more - I read it a long
time ago and keep checking back for new chapters! You have an amazing writing style,
and always seem to get the personalities just right. _. Keep up the good work!
| Kaworuchan chapter 8 . 2/27/2002
*jumps through the house like a crazy chicken*
a sequel .
and not just this! A GREAT SEQUEL!
*sigh* I love your fics...
| HI-FI Killer chapter 8 . 1/19/2002
Okay,I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH!
Write more as quickly as possible please!
I can't seem to see that computer doesn't seem to want to go to that website.I'll try again though.
| Goruda Shiro chapter 8 . 1/14/2002
Great story so far. Get more chapters out soon please.