|Reviews for Mastermind Hunting|
| 1 love m4gic chapter 7 . 8/28
WTF? WTF? WTF? WTF? That was SO RANDOM! WTF? SO fcking random...i hope Harry did not become a demi god or something all of a sudden...or too OP...that would take away any tension and excitement as i would know that he will win no matter what...
| 1 love m4gic chapter 5 . 8/28
| 1 love m4gic chapter 4 . 8/28
Something. Other than that...i enjoy this very much! Thx for the chapter!
| bluezy chapter 8 . 7/21
Cool, you found a way to implement the LHC in your stories :)
| bluezy chapter 3 . 7/21
I really am liking it so far, you wrote a thrilling fic here;).
| bluezy chapter 2 . 7/20
I truly adore those little limericks at the end of your chapters.
I, however, seem to have the impression I've read this story before.
| Bluezy chapter 1 . 7/20
I adore your little haiku. Now about your story, I have just read the first chapter and it has me somewhat enthralled.
| jaron5 chapter 14 . 6/30
At the same time, in the Italian part of the Alps mountain range...
The wonderful morning scenery of the Dolomites, around the town of Cortina di Ampezzo, was breathtaking. It didn't take more than a few seconds for the director to enjoy it, though.
"Okay, people, time to move on. Let's get this scene done!"
The actors got in place, ready to continue their current job. Lithgow and Stallone stood face to face, both in a pink tutu.
"Cliffhanger, scene 183, take 4!" yelled one of the technicians, and the play unfolded. At the same time, Harlin was wondering if the scene was actually useful for the plot. Maybe not, he thought.
*Sarcasm* Haha. Hilarious. *Sarcasm ended*
| jaron5 chapter 10 . 6/30
Er a John Doe? Is he of any interest?
| SixFtWookie chapter 40 . 6/19
That was amazing. My new favorite fic, by far. The alternate ending is far superior, even if it did finish a little rushed. I loved everything about this story.
| invisiblegirl0598 chapter 8 . 5/23
so, I'm confused now... not sure what's confusing me exactly, but my brain is struggling right now.
| fhl1234 chapter 1 . 5/21
| G Fawkes chapter 39 . 5/11
Have you ever read the HP fic "Can't have it both ways". If not try it (can't remember, either ChemProf or Robst).
Point is... Last chapter nothing could make YOUR Harry feel pain, because he disconnected his pain receptors, or something. Now, you have Voldemort enhancing his anti-apparition wards with a pain curse, similar to the Cruciatus, and Harry shaking in pain after trying to ap out of Gokens home.
Well... Which way is it? No pain, Super Harry? Or new toys for bad guys? Can't have it both ways. Put someone ELSE in pain, problem solved. Make Harry SENSE it, but not FEEL it, and you are kosher.
I would argue, veheme tly, that levitation IS magic, and there ain't none of it happening without it. Metamorphing, same way. No skin hardening for sword fights. No FOUR arm growing. And really, only very limited mind 'arts' . Nothing OFFENSIVE, at all. Occlumency, to protect, I'll give you, but legilmency is a SPELL, whether passive, casual, or intentional. Package sharing, mind re-building, none of it passes muster.
Next morning (got busy and couldn't read all afternoon and evening)
Now Ive read further, and Riddles in some bubble and Harry has wings! Pretty sure THAT is magic! You can't effing grow wings out of your mother effing back without magic. Everyone is crying. I have no idea wtf is happening. Harry is going to personally fly the bubble into the Sun, like Icarus, or something?!
Another almost good fic for the QUIT pile.
| GF chapter 38 . 5/10
Grrrrrr. Albus was invite to the DoM to WITNESS THE DESTRUCTION of one of these (horcruxes). Then you have Paracelsus not knowing How to destroy one?! Nice forethought.
Grr nmbr 2...
Underage magicals are ALLOWED to defend themselves in the event of an attack! EVERY magical should always be armed, just in case. Leaving the house without a wand is practically begging for trouble. They already are nearly helplessly ignorant in the muggle world.
Your Harry goes from one of the most ridiculousl Super-Harrys anyone has ever read, to fainting like he's a five year old girl. OoC doesn't even scratch the surface
| G Fawkes chapter 37 . 5/9
That crap about making Crabbe into a bomb wasn't your best work.
Maybe you forgot he's an idiot, and barely magical? So , only worth like, less than one percent of good, quality, explodin' material?
Fat is good for soap, though! (Fight Club)