|Reviews for Mastermind Hunting|
| Dayside chapter 11 . 9/8
Welp that's a drop. It's a good story but the author can't write a consistent character. MCs personality and maturity fluctuates WILDLY. It's all over the fucking place sometimes he reads like a 30 year old sometimes it's like he's a toddler.
| erozoth chapter 1 . 8/2
Not really a fanfiction. Just a novel that uses the same name. To much was changed to really be any sort of fanfiction and not even in a really logical way. Meeting Draco was just the last straw that breaks the level of belief required to read it.
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/27
fantastic chapter, as usual!
What I don't understand, though, is Snape.
From his actions in first year, especially those on Halloween with Quirell, he seemed mostly…good, you know? I mean, not "good," per se, but at least against Voldemort. So what happened? Was it that the act of hosting Voldemort made him take on some Voldemort-ish characteristics? That's what happened with Mustafa and Ulrike, right? (Well, to some extent; they became more active after Harry's possession, certainly)
Of course, that was also somewhat different in that Ulrike and Mustafa's conciousnesses weren't, you know, bound and stuffed in a corner the way Snape's was, which you'd THINK would make him resent Voldemort a bit more…
So why is he so WITH Voldemort now? It was certainly not because Dumbledore kicked him out of Hogwarts-he was teaching Draco Malfoy the Unforgiveables and was helping Voldemort mess with Malfoy's head, so obviously he was WITH Voldemort even then.
To be fair, given the form he took on, Snape doesn't seem to be entirely on the side of the Dark. I mean, some archmage is nowhere near as bad as the four horsemen of the apocalypse, or an archdemon for heavens sake.
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/26
lol. love it
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/26
lol. I would absolutely bet on the length of Harry's life considering he's the main character and basically CANNOT die.
The great thing about fiction is that you have some amount of security with everything, you know? You might scream at the characters for their stupid actions but there's some rules that just AREN'T broken usually, like the protagonist usually survives until the end of the story at which they might well die gruesome deaths, and the issues will resolve SOMEHOW even if it's not well, and … well, that doesn't very great, does it.
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/26
loool. Everyone just caring so much about the Dursleys
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/26
LOOOL. I love the last part. Totally hilarious.
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/25
lol. just imagine dumbledore and the lot continuing their search for Harry Potter when Harry Potter is literally sitting under their noses.
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/25
loool. Ablue doubledoor. that's fantastic.
OH GOD, his relationship with literally EVERYONE is just SO SWEET.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/25
Oh god, looool. Harry Potter (or, well, Dursley) was why the first gulf war happened. Of course.
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/25
Lol. Dumbledore’s search is just hilarious. It’s so fantastic.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/25
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25
Chew what’s bitten? Uh… ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25
Lol. The poem at the end is great.
| Joshbbeer chapter 9 . 4/10
Stupid storyline why would you ruin it by going scifi