I was enjoying the story at first, but steadily I find it's growing tiring and boring. Nonstop action and drama gets boring fairly quickly without breaks to calm down. It's just not feasible for the tension to last too long that way. So far it's interesting though.

But skipping forwards and backwards in time, seemingly randomly, is just tiring. Keeping track of relationships is also a pain. I feel like some breaks in the drama and action would do wonders.

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Why do you keep giving Ron Harry's victories?

This is a stupid convoluted mess. The writing is good, but the plot is shit.

Good story, interesting plot... right up until the ending. Not real fond of anything beyond Harry becomes Minister of Magic. No reason for him to fail. SuperHarry is supposed to effect positive change...blah blah. ...not go bezerko and destroy the universe. Still, I enjoyed the other 99.9 percent and will simply obliviate the last disturbing weird trajectory. Thanks

He took a deep breath, and spoke. "I, Ronald Bilius Weasley, solemnly swear not to tell anyone, living or dead or in between, about what I'll experience until school starts again."

A silence.

"Wow," said Harry, "I think it was quite complete
But after school starts again I'll blab all I want.

Tracey Davis is half-blood, not muggle-born so get your facts right about their blood status at least if everything else is going to be Occ.

I love your little verses
And this one asked for ‘Something’,
Some thing of praise I venture?
So hosannas now I bring
And flowers to lay at your feet,
In humble homage to your skill
In writing this adventure.
But also I bring curses:
‘Cos it takes over my head,
‘Just one more chapter’ again
Keeps me from my bed
Where I should be lain.

Meh. OOC I could understand, even piling up shameless non-canon power ups, too, to the extent. But Draco Malfoy fighting in Muggle martial arts tournament in fricking China before Hogwarts age? Against muggles? How about the heck no.

Dec 12, 2023 c40
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"English is exceedingly complex language"

Uhh, excuse me, no? It doesn't have miriads of morphemes where each of those used changes the word drastically (Russian), it does not have a variety of possible conjugations for verbs (Spanish), it does not have tonal words where each word can be almost the same but with slightly different pronunciation changes its meaning (Thai), it does not have a miriad of hieroglyphs where each means a separate word instead of alphabete with letters that combine into words (Chinese), it does not have three simultaneously in use alphabets for formal, informal and foreign words (Japanese), it does not have the unpredictability where half of written vowels are not pronounced, or pronounced irregularly (French).

In fact, aside from artificial languages like Esperanto and Interslavic, I think English would be the easiest to learn.

I'm not really a Halfblood. J.K. never knew that my Mom was actually born Lily McGraw a Pureblood witch .Who was switched with a very sick Lily Evans when they were both 2 years old to save Lily from being killed by a Dark Harry James Potter was actually borna PureBlood

12 year old Wizard. A Magician is not a Wizard its a muggle pretending to do magic .Usaually on stage.A Wizard is a male person who does real Difference.

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Not 1 year old. I was 15 months old.
Read the books.

Ot turned into stone. Just petrified.