Surely, some others have argued that a blast furnace is not a 'natural' or ' pure' form of fire. Why not a lightning started forest fire? Or a lava flow from a volcano?
I think apparating "just the blade" of the sword is pushing the believability just a bit.

Grabbing the coin will not give him a SCAR. It will give him a Burn. Or a wound. A scar comes a month later, when most of the wound is healed, and he has shiny new pink skin raised up or bumpy, left there. Eventually it will fade some or darken, get thicker t the touch, and be less obvious. Maybe the werewolf skin speeds that up some. Ficworld IS fictional, after all.
People! Use your heads! If I cut myself with my breakfast knife right here, right now... What will I have five minutes from now, when it stops bleeding? A scar? NO! It's still a cut! Until it scabs over, slowly heels, itches like a MFer, and eventually seals over.
THEN! You see the SCAR!

(Sorry, but that rant is independant of language barriers)

Bletchley only let 'one in five' through the hoops... And Harry let in THREE. Either you worded it wrong, or Harry should not be many ACTUAL attempts for each one, maybe?

No way he would be THAT irresponsible to take Tracy. And Goken would have outright refused. She's a liability and endangers BOTH of them by being there!

bzzzzzzzttttt! (penalty buzzer sound)

No.
After Snape left, the gargoyle would have gone back into place in the opening, blocking the door. Then, when Harry left, the gargoyle MOVING again would have let Dumbles know that someone had breached his door... even if it was to break OUT, not in.
Then, Harry may or may not have been caught. We'll guess- no. But Albus would have known somebody was there, and maybe one of the portraits saw Harry.

So the "responsible, compassionate, caring, 'adult' teachers" just let two eleven years old CHILDREN jump in a TAXI and leave the scene where ALL of the girl's entire FAMILY was killed by nine terrorists?!
No calming draft.
No blanket and hot chocolate.
No 'we'll find you some new guardians ASAP, but you'll have to come stay at Hogwart's until then'.

Just send the poor kid out into the night with her other little, useless, muggleborn friend. That's not being muggle friendly. That's not even being HUMAN!

(why would Dumbledore and McGonagall even show up, anyway?! And before the aurors? There wouldn't be any kind of 'sensors' or surveillance at the grandmother's house, if they even ARE present at Tracy's house.)

A round of presentations (instead of introductions)
Incoming holidays (upcoming)
Back in the early chapters, using 'frontier' for- what? Border? "The continent", meaning anything on the mainland, NOT the UK islands?
People and cars both described as "Occidental looking" was my biggest clue. Never heard that one before.

Good for you if this is a second language fic! I couldn't do it! I just wish there was a flag in the bio, or something that says "go easy on me, English is not my native tongue".

Also... Great story. Now to next chapter.

I hate Ron being treated well. But that's just me.

Nice reference to the fire at Windsor Castle, it really shows the work you put into this!

And i give up. The hopping through times and to different characters is too confusing for me. I prefer it following a timeline.
Still, thanks for sharing.

The names would be more common german names as Jörg and Günther. Never heard Jorg, Gunther at least is a name.

Really enjoying this so far, Harry powers certainly are a breath of fresh air, I’m wishing for multi body Harry

Ta so tu

Okay. Only 7th chapter and protagonist became godlike already. Not like he laked power before anyway. Well, if there supposed Battles of Gods in this story, i guess it's okay. But still... I hate Harry luck as it was in canone, there no need to make it even more ridiculous.

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