What would be the point for a Malfoy to come in china and cheat at a Kung Fu match, you do not lern anything by cheating so why spend the efforts where no reward is present ? To glorify himself ? Even though nobody in England will understand his boasts ?

Furthermore, why the heck would a Malfoy go into muggle china ? They despise muggles and want to have nothing to do with them ? Could you please lay a bit of background to explain to us how it came to be that the Malfoy heir went to china for the vacations and decided on the spot to participate in a kung fu competition using some items to cheat that he conveniently brought with him for just this purpose.

This is nice. Keep up the good work. Update soon please!

~~Don't conform to the world, make the world get over it!

An interesting start to this series. Knowing what I do of your skill at writing from "Strengthening Wounds" I look forward to a highly entertaining piece of fiction.

Good chapter. A very interesting idea with Draco. Makes one wonder...

Anyway, I love the story.

Continue soon,

-exile

now this is a idea i have never herd befpre and i like it , but did u aculy have to bring draco n to it this soon, cant wait to see what harry dose with the years after that , just for the heck of it harry should not go to hogworts but another school where albis cant find him.

oh it soo rocks cant wait for more!

debbs

omg! an original harry disappears story! wow! i had thought that there would never be a new story that didn't remind me of like 8 others again...but apparently there was no reason to think so cause this one is great! can't wait to see what happens next!

ps. erm if i sound a little like a crazy person its cause im having a very happy day and am somewhat gregarious right now.

First, no poetics. I like your writeing style and think it should stay the same. This is really good, Im lovin' it! It's cool how its been done to a way where the parents like Harry (for now) without overexaggerating it too much. Bravo! Updtae soon, I can' twait to read on!

~Cassandra

The Dursleys love the new house? I assume that Harry's magic healed Petunia of her medical woes. Will Draco get showned up for using illegal weapons?

rly rly good ! update soon!

Now this HP story looks pretty good. I really hate the abuseed Harry that JKR uses. If I had my say, I would have insisted JKR stop the abusive behavior after first year. I don't mean stopping ever ything. Vernon can glare and speak harshly, after all neighbors might hear him if he yelled as so many have him acting. Having a child or teen outside doing adult level work? Not really in character with the Dursley's wish to act normal.

Looking forward to your next update. Liked how you had the Dursey's turn out after losing their first baby. Very possible they would have turned out this way if they had lost their firstborn. Also I like the fact that at 5 Harry was able to do more powerful wanderless magic than Dumbledore at his great age. It makes better sense than the story about Lily giving her life to save Harry. But we all know that if Dumbledore had discovered that Harry had control over his magic at such a young age that he would have put a block on his magic. I hope that when Dumbledore finds Harry that Harry takes a dislike to the old man and doesn't trust him.