Reviews for Mastermind Hunting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is full of mistakes just to create a bigger show, its a fun read but its also to long |
![]() ![]() ![]() why on earth would someone like harry go to school, he can simply copy all the momories and be done with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fantastic story! Thanks for taking the time to write it. - SPIH |
![]() ![]() "Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, if you don't use it, it will rust." One of the Highlander movies. I just felt it well fitted to this chapter's title. |
![]() ![]() Bullshit |
![]() ![]() Why the f, didn't he try to take Snape knowledge? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is as repetitive as all the other stories. Just a rather boring and flawed retelling of the canon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf, Draco. With muggles. In China. I'm just the Chinese-American folk who's crying here at the sheer stupidity in all of this. It's so bloody brilliantly stupid that I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, even with how op the time Turner was |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice first chapter, I especially like how it's not riddled with grammar errors(this may seem like a small thing, but I tend to write down all grammar errors I see, so not finding any is a blessing). It's also original enough for me to be interested in reading it, which is rare(I have read way to much HP fanfiction...and way too much HTTYD fanfiction when I think of it...maybe just too much fanfiction in general). Looks interesting(in a good way), and the first chapter is well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will his way to enter the Apparation bypass anti app wards? because i was really looking forward to him messing with people like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh come on, this chapter lost me a lot. An agent of Agent Jones just happens to be in Switzerland with binoculars at a ski resort? Wouldn't the CIA just cut its loses. They just sent commandos in to Sweden like nothing? Even still the fact you had them skiing at the time, literally the hardest time to recognize someone. When I go snowboarding I can only tell who is who with there jackets. After all the stuff thats happened Petunia still hasn't told Harry his actual name is Potter and he is a Wizard. That Hogwarts is in England as a actual option for a school for him. Why did Harry wipe Josh and Addison's minds too, every single time he is close to actually figuring out the magical world he chooses not to while wondering whats the magical World. It is just a bunch of B.S, just keep dragging us along in circles, Harry should know about the magical world by now and him ending that conversation with them when he did makes no sense. He could have learned everything he needed to and then wiped there minds with the same results. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I guess we aren't going to find out why the CIA was so interested in Harry? So interested that they sent them to China and France, which still makes no real sense? Where were the American Wizards? Does the CIA higher ups know of magic? The aztec thing should just be another story, so much is going on right now and that seems like overkill in stretch of the imagination type of way. |
![]() ![]() And you said your poetry wasn't any good... it is. I'm almost envious. ;D |