Reviews for Mastermind Hunting
Steve chapter 9 . 1/12
Not every Hogwarts student is British. Also there are two other wand makers in Diagon Alley where wands don't have the trace .
Robert chapter 9 . 1/12
Harry was no baby he was 15 months old .That is a toddler after a baby and before a kid. Kid starts at kindergarten. Preteen 10 to 12 teen 13 to 19 full adult 21 old enough to drink .
Steve chapter 9 . 1/12
British are funny .They say Damn and Bloody Hell are bad
Damn can be used as a non cuss word as well. And Bloody candescribe someone bleeding and Hell is an actual place .Heaven is a place and nobody calls that a cuss word. Clear prejudice that is.
Markus chapter 9 . 1/12
I'm sending you a message to your luck
Me chapter 8 . 1/11
A staff is a staff not an early wand. Not everything in magic has to be a Wand. There wete such things as magic staff. Alastor Moody had a magic cane on Harry Potter.A real powerful Wizard don't need a wand or a staff or even speak.
A powerful Wizard can just think something and it appears or happens.
Tie chapter 7 . 1/11
Xtill rymimg lol
Me chapter 6 . 1/10
You like to ryme alot. So we shall nickname you Rymer
Mack chapter 6 . 1/9
The slow way penetrates the shield.
Mile chapter 5 . 1/8
Time for Mike
to take a hike.
Oh look up in the sky it's a kite.
What a wonderful site.
Sandy chapter 4 . 1/8
Amstrad CPC 6128 #109
YEP She was a beauty although she was a bit slow even in 1985.
She got the job done. I called mine Dawn. As it awaken a new age of technology.
Me chapter 3 . 1/7
I read this story before. Why am I reading this story again?
Maybe I am Krazy?
Me chapter 1 . 1/7
Oh my it's review time.
I think it's also my bedtime.
Mick chapter 1 . 1/7
What sick person would leave a baby on a concrete step on a cold day when the temperture is 10C outside? Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore that's who.
leylinjan chapter 8 . 12/6/2022
I started reading this story several times but never managed to finish. This part is just too dark and the whole story is a bit too unfeeling for me. We get to know Harry and his thoughts, but all the other characters seem like cardboard cutouts. So I skip some of it. Your world-building is awesome, but it's a shame that I can't emotionally connect to the characters. So I don't know if I'll manage to read till the end this time either. Still, awesome story and kudos to you.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2022
this is sooo bad. Some of the things happening is so fucking contrived and the whole situation and setup is shit.
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