You just had to shoehorn ginny into the story. If his spells are so strong why tf isn't he throwing explosive hexes or w/e at death eaters? Seems like his power level is different every time he fights. It's whatever the plot needs it to be.

Why hasn't he taken big chunks of magical knowledge by now from someones mind? He could've done it to Snape multiple times.

Is the god inside Harry ever going to do anything?

Feels like the MC has been super nerfed. He spent all that time working on his magic and when he gets to the school he's at most on par with hermione but with protagonist cheats. I thought he was supposed to be smart.

Not a bad story, a tad long and going off into random thing that could have been stories of their own...
You constantly had people fainting, had Harry going off into battle at eleven and twelve, acting as if he was twenty or so. You made so many twists and turns, then barely had time for Sirius and Remus after introducing them. Even when he visited his 'parents', they really didn't have anything to do with the story.
But the ending? Horrible. Last chapter and you kill people off? You turned hope into sadness. I spent days reading this, and now I feel cheated. Totally bereft of good feelings, and astounded that you did this to us, your readers.

Seems like the duplicates have all of Harry's best weapons. What if he needs Merlin's wand? It's come in handy quite a few times. Now after Ryan's demise, what happened to all those good weapons?

After considering what was written in the beginning of this chaper I was so sure that you sent Harry to the labyrinth with the minitour. And, with Copycat wanting to be Pinocchio (a Real boy!), I am wondering if you are going to kill off original Harry? I hope not! Huh, I might be right about copycat...

Sad...no Hedwig?
Also, what in the world is the entity in the machinery...er...computer in Switzerland?

Really not liking that the REASON for the CIA to be after Harry has not been said. Also, why didn't the magical gov't of the USA, China, or France have an inkling about Harry?

I can't really follow this. Pinging all the over the joint.

Lol not over til it's over. Death is just another step to the top . See ya. On Tarkas Nine In 2076

Dumbledore never gave her full name. He never said her middle only said Madam Doloris Umbridge

Actually Japan is not the farest away from England .New Zealand is farther away than Japan.

Room of Requirement no S on the end. It's only 1 room not 2 .

That"s a boys school it only has a headmaster.