Reviews for Mastermind Hunting |
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![]() ![]() Harry was no baby he was 15 months old .That is a toddler after a baby and before a kid. Kid starts at kindergarten. Preteen 10 to 12 teen 13 to 19 full adult 21 old enough to drink . |
![]() ![]() British are funny .They say Damn and Bloody Hell are bad Damn can be used as a non cuss word as well. And Bloody candescribe someone bleeding and Hell is an actual place .Heaven is a place and nobody calls that a cuss word. Clear prejudice that is. |
![]() ![]() I'm sending you a message to your luck |
![]() ![]() A staff is a staff not an early wand. Not everything in magic has to be a Wand. There wete such things as magic staff. Alastor Moody had a magic cane on Harry Potter.A real powerful Wizard don't need a wand or a staff or even speak. A powerful Wizard can just think something and it appears or happens. |
![]() ![]() Xtill rymimg lol |
![]() ![]() You like to ryme alot. So we shall nickname you Rymer |
![]() ![]() The slow way penetrates the shield. |
![]() ![]() Time for Mike to take a hike. Oh look up in the sky it's a kite. What a wonderful site. |
![]() ![]() Amstrad CPC 6128 #109 YEP She was a beauty although she was a bit slow even in 1985. She got the job done. I called mine Dawn. As it awaken a new age of technology. |
![]() ![]() I read this story before. Why am I reading this story again? Maybe I am Krazy? |
![]() ![]() Oh my it's review time. I think it's also my bedtime. |
![]() ![]() What sick person would leave a baby on a concrete step on a cold day when the temperture is 10C outside? Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore that's who. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this story several times but never managed to finish. This part is just too dark and the whole story is a bit too unfeeling for me. We get to know Harry and his thoughts, but all the other characters seem like cardboard cutouts. So I skip some of it. Your world-building is awesome, but it's a shame that I can't emotionally connect to the characters. So I don't know if I'll manage to read till the end this time either. Still, awesome story and kudos to you. |
![]() ![]() this is sooo bad. Some of the things happening is so fucking contrived and the whole situation and setup is shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much thrill |