Is the author Chinese? I sense some chinese novel style here

So you have Harry time turner breaking on him with no side affects like cool powers yet come now.

I could do without the cheesy harem plot. Also the uncomfortably awkward Tracy Harry moments I could live without. The story doesn’t need a relationship to move it along yet you’re forcing the relationship plot.

This whole Ginny scene is way to long. Harry should have take the memories.

I really don’t care just take her damn memories already

wtf is this mess?!

Unfortunately I don't have any lsd to make this story understandable. It's all over the place in tone and events, Harry's personality is flip flop, and Harry is somehow too cautious and not cautious enough. I honestly can't understand why Harry trusts 3 random 11 year olds but not a single adult in Hogwarts. Like he has had no interactions with Dumbledore or the Wizarding world and yet he acts like they were the ones spying, hunting, and hurting him and his family.

this is hands down the most chaotic and confusing fanfic I've ever read. there's far too many characters we never see again, random shit about Aztec mythology, a particle accelerator? like bro wtf is thus story going. I loved it at first but now I'm just plain confused

The story was well written up until the last chapter. I’m not a fan of the ending. Didn’t Harry still have access to a time-turner to save his family like he had saved others previously in this story? Also, why did you have him almost killing all of the muggles?! An evil AI? Leaving the planet?! There was no build up to this ending. It would have been best if this story had stopped mid chapter, before Harry’s family was killed.

Welp that's a drop. It's a good story but the author can't write a consistent character. MCs personality and maturity fluctuates WILDLY. It's all over the fucking place sometimes he reads like a 30 year old sometimes it's like he's a toddler.

Not really a fanfiction. Just a novel that uses the same name. To much was changed to really be any sort of fanfiction and not even in a really logical way. Meeting Draco was just the last straw that breaks the level of belief required to read it.

fantastic chapter, as usual!

What I don't understand, though, is Snape.

From his actions in first year, especially those on Halloween with Quirell, he seemed mostly…good, you know? I mean, not "good," per se, but at least against Voldemort. So what happened? Was it that the act of hosting Voldemort made him take on some Voldemort-ish characteristics? That's what happened with Mustafa and Ulrike, right? (Well, to some extent; they became more active after Harry's possession, certainly)
Of course, that was also somewhat different in that Ulrike and Mustafa's conciousnesses weren't, you know, bound and stuffed in a corner the way Snape's was, which you'd THINK would make him resent Voldemort a bit more…

So why is he so WITH Voldemort now? It was certainly not because Dumbledore kicked him out of Hogwarts-he was teaching Draco Malfoy the Unforgiveables and was helping Voldemort mess with Malfoy's head, so obviously he was WITH Voldemort even then.

To be fair, given the form he took on, Snape doesn't seem to be entirely on the side of the Dark. I mean, some archmage is nowhere near as bad as the four horsemen of the apocalypse, or an archdemon for heavens sake.

lol. love it

lol. I would absolutely bet on the length of Harry's life considering he's the main character and basically CANNOT die.

The great thing about fiction is that you have some amount of security with everything, you know? You might scream at the characters for their stupid actions but there's some rules that just AREN'T broken usually, like the protagonist usually survives until the end of the story at which they might well die gruesome deaths, and the issues will resolve SOMEHOW even if it's not well, and … well, that doesn't very great, does it.

lol.

loool. Everyone just caring so much about the Dursleys