Reviews for Divine Intervention
Guest chapter 22 . 5/26/2015
I would absolutely lover a sequaal, wonderful story
Shembre chapter 22 . 4/2/2010
Awesome story, Liena! I've actually read this story at least one other time, although I can't say if it was finished then or not, and thoroughly enjoyed it. The plot was great, and writing was great, and the amount of violence was justified to what the characters were feeling, which gave it so much drama and interest. Pretty cool, in the least! :D
ArideTWT chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
i like this and havent even read it yet hehe!
Panty Poison chapter 22 . 8/1/2006
Aww, luff this story so much. Terrible to see it end, but oh well. It's been fun, XP. I likes the end, felt very mystic to me. Anyway, great story and I hope you write more soon.
Denise Raven chapter 22 . 7/27/2006
I must say that I rather enjoyed reading this. You tried to be true to the nature of more traditional lions rather than sugarcoating everything like Disney. I'd like to read more of your work... You made me want to draw the Gods and Goddesses, so vivid were your descriptions of them.
Ochi chapter 22 . 7/25/2006
Ah, a nice note to finish on. A sad note, yes, but a nice one nonetheless. I trust that you enjoyed writing this as much I enjoyed reading it. Only a true passion for one's writing could spawn such a high-quality tale as this one. If there's anything I regret, it's not coming here earlier to see you through the whole process.

It's been a good one.

Ochi chapter 21 . 7/25/2006
You've finally updated, and first of all I need to congratulate you on your gaining of two new readers. That possessive part of me wants this story all to Morpheus, Demo and myself. But it's great to see this story getting what it deserves.

Maten, Maten, Maten. I'm not liking him much now, not at all. Looks like I was right about him being the second Scar. Except he seems a lot stronger than the one before him, which really isn't so great for the those lionesses.

You say that this may be the second-last chapter. I'm eager to see how everything'll end.

GP King Lygerion chapter 22 . 7/25/2006
Again a nice chapter, I really hope that Maten gets dethroned some time
GP King Lygerion chapter 21 . 7/25/2006
I hope a new king will take his place sometime becouse he is just fricking evil now!
GP King Lygerion chapter 20 . 6/9/2006
Gijinka Renamon chapter 20 . 5/29/2006
Not bad. Is there going to be more?
Ochi chapter 20 . 5/25/2006
So the reign of a second Scar has begun.

That's another nice chapter as always. With the way things are going, I'd say that it would be quite hard to make the ending of this story a happy one. But knowing you, I'm confident that it will be satisfying nonetheless.

thingspast chapter 20 . 5/25/2006
Goodness me! And suddenly you update when I don't notice...

Ah, a trio of endings, and all finding their own kind of strange peace...

Arina knowing that she must leave her world to find a new one was pleasently bittersweet - and her gradual shift from the vocabulary of a lioness to that of a human over the chapter left a haunting image...

Kiara. Poor dear. In this atmospheric but very dark story she seems a relic of a former, more innocent time, whose tragic wish is granted in a way that leaves her alone amongst the characters in not being compromised.

And Maten - I like the concept of his reign. Cruel but successful. The Pridelands has perhaps slipped from its curse, but has truly lost its innocence in the meantime. Still, the circle turns, who knows what the future holds.

If there's one thing that your story still has in bucketloads its atmosphere, these chapters are positively haunting...

I look forward to the last...

P.S. Care to look at what I've been writing in the meantime? No pressure, just curious what you think...
Ochi chapter 19 . 5/23/2006
Oh, Kiara. Couldn't take the pain of going on without Kovu. I guess it only makes sense; they really did love each other in the movie. And in a way, "killing them off" (a rather harsh way of putting it) is like giving the living residents of Pride Rock a fresh start, with new rulers.

But Maten? I wonder how he'll do as the King. He seemed plenty evil to me in the parts of the story that have passed so far. It wouldn't be quite a satisfying ending if the story were to come to a close before the pride was plunged into the reign of a new Scar. I'll wait to see what happens.

Panty Poison chapter 19 . 5/23/2006
Ah, much sadness indeed. Nice spur of updating, I really missed this story. :) Don't worry, you haven't lost your touch one bit.
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