|Reviews for A Dragon's Treasure|
| Toraach chapter 18 . 9/3/2016
That's so good you have posted a new chapter. I enjoy it, the same as I enjoyed previous chapters. I like how you change canon in your story, that's great.
| Tremendously Sassy chapter 18 . 8/31/2016
| White Moon Falcon Ninja chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
Draco/Ginny? Gross! What's with the end where: You say it was fun,LuciusNarcissa say "We thought so too"? Two Fun-Fiction Authoresses can play this game! Lasstly, a question: How feel you towards Harry Potter? Would you like it if I did a story where I become part of the action? Oh! I just thought up a challenge for you!
| Tremendously Sassy chapter 17 . 4/30/2016
Dear Heroine of the Valley,
First of all Your story is really amazing!
I absolutly like the idea of Narcissa and Lucius having another baby then Draco. Not to tease him but you know, Draco would be a good brother we all know that right? Also to see what a girl would add to the malfoy family. It's sad that Lucius has to go to Azkaban for 3 months, that he can't be there for gemma and draco too. Draco's honestly is hilarious. I hope he'll be able to connect with Gemma and be her big brother. Narcissa as a protective mother? She already was.. we know that but with a girl just adds the topping on the cake. You really should continue this story, I would kill for writing skills like you have. I'm really curious how her future will be. draco's just 16/15? When gemma attends hogwarts she'll be 11 and draco will be 26/27? That's a big age difference isn't it? Ah well, we'll see how that works out. You're story is funny, sad, and has some action. It's a shame gemma's still so tiny and not able to talk. LOL. Now I'm rambling. SO you really should update this story, I'm in love with it and yea you should update :)
| Tremendously Sassy chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
So ehm. *Cough* that was ehm. Weird? What the hell did I just read? LOL. Foreplay disarming battles? Oh why the hell not.
| Toraach chapter 17 . 3/22/2015
It's great. Their visit in Azkaban. But also all things what may be in the future.
I found Astoria as cute and good girl, diffrent from Pancy, or her arrogant sister.
I really wish you would write next chapters. Because your story is one of the best I have ever read.
| Toraach chapter 16 . 3/22/2015
I don't know why but I started to dislike a new teacher.
Draco and his luck :D with a baby sister came to the DoM.
| Toraach chapter 15 . 3/22/2015
Your version is better than Rowling's. Also I apreciate that some one is alive and he knows about a locket.
Poor Lucius :(
| Toraach chapter 14 . 3/22/2015
An interesting plan of Lucius. I see his point. But the most important is what Cissa will do. She learnt a value information.
| Toraach chapter 13 . 3/22/2015
I like growing tensions in triangle Draco, Astoria, Pansy. Draco doesn't see anything, but the girls are on a war and could kill for his atentions :)
Also father and son relations very well shown in this chapter. You make the best and the most interesting creation of Draco, I've ever seen.
| Toraach chapter 12 . 3/21/2015
Bella's return, so interesting :) she is crazy.
An interesting thing about Draco finding about Potter's lessons with Snape.
| Toraach chapter 11 . 3/21/2015
The conversation with Bella is well-written, I can feel her madness, but still I she in her some last pieces of humanity, that she had told Narcissa to return to her daughter, because she needed her.
Also I apreciatte Cissa's steps to reconciliate with Andromeda, as a letter from the previous chapter.
Party and an introduction of Astoria is also good.
| Toraach chapter 10 . 3/21/2015
This is great. Wonderful are students reactions on testrals.
But the best in my opinnion is how you can add depth for backrounds characters like Notts. Theo in your story is the best his portrait I've ever seen, he has personality and own life. Draco who has strugles with acepting a little sister is also very interesting. I appreciate also Narcissa in your story, and her relations with sisters.
| Toraach chapter 9 . 3/21/2015
Hello. I have to say that your idea with Harry and an apology letter is great. I have never seen something more humilating for Harry than he had to read in the front of all class so self-critical letter, he would be a target of jokes after that :D Great!
| Toraach chapter 6 . 3/21/2015
Your story is great, I like plots, characters. :) Nice twist with the minister on the graveyard :)
Also I like how you told us a story from Draco's point.