|Reviews for Final Distance|
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/31/2014
I wish this wasn't abandoned its too good.
| Lady Knight Keladry chapter 13 . 1/13/2012
I really like this fic. I love the slow sort of courtship that happened between Seth and Atemu. It just makes it seem so much more real and passionate. That little bit about the rule of friendship was so sweet. I feel a bit bad for Yami; Seto seems to be a total jerk though I suppose he does have his good moments. Malik’s character is just really amusing to me and I find myself wondering just how well Malik’s character and Bakura’s character mesh in this fic. It’s a great story.
| Candy world chapter 13 . 10/2/2009
Only two stories I'm attached to them, and this is one of them, Damn writer block Ar ...
I wish if you can at least tell me what you imtended to do with Yami and Seto, not as story just the events. please please please :)
| dragonlilly1993 chapter 13 . 4/10/2009
I CANT BELIEVE U AMDANDONED THIS STORY! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! PLZ IM BEGGING U TO UPDATE WHEN IU GET BACK INTO THIS STORY! U CANT JUST STOP IT IN THE MIDDLE LIKE THIS!
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 13 . 12/20/2008
Ah, just finished the last chapter. And what a great end to that too. Well, not an end to the story since it really doesn't have one, but and end to the chapter. Though it does make me wish that I could read more.
Well, this was really good, even if it won't be finished. I enjoyed it quite a bit, teehee. I'll just have to make up an ending for it in my head. The characterization for all of the peoples was really good and the reading style was great to follow ad easy to read. It was nice. I'm sure that your writing style has gotten even better now, since it's been a few years since you wrote this, it looks like. Maybe I'll see if there's anything else that I'd like to read by you. But anyways, thanks for a good story!
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 12 . 12/20/2008
Seth is finally being cute! And dare I say that I'm starting to like him a bit more than his brother? Well, I can't really be sure. But maybe. So, Yami and Seto have finally done the dirty. And Yami seemed to enjoy it. Just better hope that Atemu doesn't find out, as I'm sure that that won't turn out well.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 11 . 12/20/2008
Aw, Atemu's so cute, trying to find the perfect outfit to wear. I guess he'll have to go shopping. Darn you Bakura! Stop trying so hard to get laid and just be happy! One more thing, I wonder what Seth did that made Gozaburo so pissed at him? I wonder if I'll find out before I reach the end of this?
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
Yay! Seth and Atemu are finally getting together! It only took... ten chapters but it's happening! Now they really can all be happy together... unless... drama happens! Oh no! And I gaurentee there will be drama, because it seems like there always is and I still have three more chapters to read. So now I shall start reading them.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 9 . 12/20/2008
Tch, well now I'm upset. I'm quite happy that Malik and Bakura are for the most part together (Malik seems to have the science of seduction down-wonder if he's done it before?) but now I feel bad for Atemu. Yami just had to tell Seto their sob story. Sigh. Seth needs to stop acting like such a stuck up jerk and go comfort him. Then everybody can be happy.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 8 . 12/20/2008
This chapter wasn't very funny but it was interesting. And I think that the Kaiba twins are stalkers. They always seem to be near the Moutou twins. And they are quite clearly obsessed with them. Anyways, I wonder what Atemu really feels for Bakura and how he would feel if he was with Malik. I'll find out soon hopefully. Next chapter!
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 7 . 12/20/2008
Oh my. Yami must be scarred for life now having seen that. Things will definitely be just a tad embarrassing next time Yami and Malik are around Bakura and Atemu. Tch, jeez, those two are kinky little pervs. Especially Bakura. Him and his dreams of a harem.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 6 . 12/20/2008
Poor Seth! A golf club? That must really hurt! Ah, Bakura is an evil genius. I really do love this so far, it's a shame that you and Psyche aren't continuing it.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 5 . 12/20/2008
Hahaha! Atemu and Seth are horrible! Next time Yami and Seto should know to not take them along on any dates. And then there's Bakura and Malik hiding out watching their every move. Creepy little stalkers... Albeit funny ones. Jounouchi made me laugh too, hitting on Malik like that. Heheh, this just keeps getting funnier and funnier; I love it.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
Seto is evil! But now I found out that he's really cute too. That scene where he asked Yami out was too funny! Haha, Seth is sure going to be in for a surprise when he founds out who the friend is bound to be. Hmm, maybe he should take some advice from his brother on how to get the guy you've been obsessing over out on a date.
| Black-Neko-Chan chapter 3 . 12/20/2008
Ah, so cute! I love Malik to death, he's so insane and clearly so very gay. And Bubbles, what a perfect nickname for him. Bakura made me laugh very much too with his talk of harems. They've got to be my favorites, with the Moutou twins right behind. The Kaibas I don't care for so much, but I do like Seto better than Seth. He's a mean little bugger, heehee.