Reviews for Counterfeit Congeniality
some one chapter 8 . 4/6/2009
you have to update, this story is to good to stop. if you don't have any ideas try something where ulrich, jeremy, odd and aleita try to bring back her memory by taking yumi to her favorite places like the factory and kadic. Also because Yumi has been in a coma for so long and didn't go to school, she'll have to take clases, but she's to nervous to go back to school so Jeremy, Odd, Ulrich and Aelita teach her along with her parents. Come on, there are so many ways you and I could go with this. IT's not that hard you just have to use your imagination, pretend you're yumi, write how you would feel if you were in her shoes. Just please, please, please, please, please, please, please update!
NekoKitten103 chapter 8 . 1/17/2008
NO! this story is like the best! needs more chapters! haha sorry if i sound demanding but really! its an amazing story and i really want to continue reading!
Alexandria J chapter 8 . 11/22/2007
Aww man, u aren't finishing it. I bet I know y, it's because u hated the idea of putting Yumi in a 3 year coma. Don't worry, I didn't hate it, I was just a little surprised.

Wish u good luck on ur upcoming stories...but I wished u could've continued this one.
psychicspyarrowangel chapter 8 . 10/15/2007
please finish the story im begging you. i need to find out what else happensbetween yumi and ulrich. email me if you are going to finish it. my email adress is
xxx chapter 8 . 10/15/2007
aww, it was a good story, but i understand. i havent updated my stories in a while either.
Zoerz chapter 7 . 4/9/2007
cool please update soon
Yeah this is deleted chapter 7 . 2/19/2006
Update soon!
DizCraziiPnaii chapter 7 . 2/17/2006
so is it finished already?

it was getting really REALLY good!
DizCraziiPnaii chapter 6 . 2/17/2006
i love it! to bad she didnt remember the pic of her and Ulrich together...
DizCraziiPnaii chapter 5 . 2/17/2006
that was awesome!
neon flights chapter 7 . 2/17/2006
*reads again* yep, that's Jenn alright. xD

it's kind of weird, really. you can tell who writes a passage by looking at the style. my pieces ALWAYS (and I mean ALWAYS) have at least a little bit of humor in it. I don't know why, I'm just comedy savvy. :3

don't worry about hiatuses and whatnot, everybody has a life to deal with.
azn dreamer xD chapter 7 . 2/16/2006
E. The first thing I noticed was my username in bold. And I'm like, "Wait... what?" And then I was like, "OH." But yeah, it wasn't that great, so no praise is needed. :] EFGH, I haven't emailed you in such a long time.
Knight of Death chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
how sweet
Lyoko Lover chapter 6 . 10/19/2005
POOR YUMI!three years are so long! I hope she'll remeber about Ulrich...UPDATE SOON!

I'm an "UxY" fan, if you don't understand!

p.s.:i'm italian ,so i'm sorry for any errors in this review!
Kodra chapter 6 . 10/8/2005
Well, first suggestion is when you choose a POV, stick with it. Don't stray from Third to First. It distracts the reader a lot.

Second, just realize that the whole Coma/Amnesia thing has been done before...alot. Maybe not in this fandom, but in others. I mean, this is playing out to be Days of our Lives: Lyoko. I'll keep reading it because it's decently well written, but I would urge you to strive to set yourself apart from the other fictions of this genre.

Kodra
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