Reviews for Harry Potter and The Protectors of Hogwarts
JJ chapter 22 . 10/23/2016
Wow.. I started reading this a long time ago and finally stumbled upon the completion of it.

What an amazing story. So heartbreaking in some areas. I do like your logic as it was quite amazing to see how McGonagall saw the trio and Draco that night they slipped out in their first year.

I have to admit overall Killian did seem a bit of a Mary Sue. We didn't really get exposed to her faults (or they were glossed over) not to mention her oh-so-noble sacrifice at the end for the children. I think this was more obvious in the fact that some of the adults were so scorned at for their behaviour.

Thank you so much for finishing this story. It's been an emotional ride but definitely a good one.
purplepuppy216 chapter 22 . 10/9/2016
Please! There has to be a sequel!
JasonOHason chapter 22 . 1/17/2016
I absolutely loved this story but you left it at such a terrible place. Please tell me there is a sequel in the works to I can find out answers to all my unanswered questions!
Wishful thinker chapter 22 . 6/27/2015
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26/2015
There are surprisingly few grammar/spelling mistakes. So far so good. Keep it up
sassy973 chapter 22 . 1/5/2015
Seriously you just ended it like that are you doing a second story. I loved it
holliecrap chapter 22 . 12/21/2014
Sorry but the ending of this was terrible. Started off great but you clearly lost interest.
TheFoxDen chapter 22 . 12/20/2014
Hello there!

So just need to start off saying fantastic piece you have written here! The quality of the work is hard to find on this site and I will state yet again great story! Thank you for the privilege of reading this fanfiction.


Chi Vayne chapter 18 . 12/9/2014
Severus Snape's regrets: Calling Lily a mudblood, joining the Death Eaters, telling Voldemort the prophecy. And all of them regrets because of how they cost him Lily in one way or the other.
Snaggledog chapter 8 . 12/9/2014
This is a great chapter. I loved the sorting hat's take down of Snape, that was very well done.
HP Fan 36 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Good start to your story keep it up
Snaggledog chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
I just found this story and I want to tell you that I have enjoyed it very much so far. The first thing that I look for in a story is the spelling, punctuation and grammar and your story is top notch. The plot is pretty good so far, you are just laying the foundation for the rest of the story, so I am anxious to see what you do.

I am shocked that you only have 31 reviews so far. You deserve many more than that.
Chi Vayne chapter 17 . 11/6/2014
Wow, quite an emotional chapter. But will anyone learn from it?
Guest chapter 19 . 10/26/2014
Please please please do not kill off Ginny just to make way for Harry/Ginny ship. H/G is the worst possible ship out there with most 3/4 of the time Ginny becoming a Ginny Sue just to amp her self with apparent coolness to make her worthy of Harry,
JJ chapter 18 . 9/15/2014
Awesome story. Not sure why it isn't more popular. I really loved the new characters too. So sad for Harry but he's not done yet I feel. There seems more outbursts to come.

It was rather enjoyable how you've made it so it can fit in the HP world and pulled out facts and things that did happen in the previous books.

I notice that you've been writing this story since 2005.. that's a long time. I hope we won't have to wait 2 years before the next update. *hint*

Loving the last few chapters.. all the emotional angst is coming out and it's probably long overdue considering the way Dumbledore tosses Harry about. Is there any chance Harry will rip into Dumbledore? That would fantastic.

I kinda expected Hermione to toss down her prefect's badge and say "I can't represent Gryffindor when our own Head of House is nothing but a coward" when she told off McGonagall.

Your grammar is a bit off here and there. eg "Luna was absently at the door separating them from the kitchen, but Tonks knew the sharp girl was paying minute attention to everything going on." Chapter 16. It's nothing major just a world missing here and there but something to keep in mind.

Is there any particular reason why you have Alana Killian in this story? I mean is there any particular secrets about her.

Glad to see there's no Harry/Ginny in this fic. Luna and Harry are fantastic but H/G means too many complications and temper tantrums.
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