|Reviews for Lives of the Innocent|
| Nekurasama chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
That was downright gruesome. Positively awful. Which makes it all the better. Loved it.
| DonQuixote chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Actually, I believe Aiffe gives parallel paths, one where Kagome kills Mouryoumaru, and one where she doesn't.
She manages to portray the irony of her showing mercy well.
| waltzing in chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Wow! This is really deep and moving. I'm truly touched at Kagome's compassion towards Mouryoumaru and Mouryoumaru softening after being given a second chance.
You captured Kagome pretty well. I think Kagome would not have the heart to kill a criminal, even if the person is worse than the devil. She'd rather die than being guilt-ridden of having to kill someone.
Darn! If only I could write this good... What's your secret?
| DraconWolf88 chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
That... was just pure excellence, Aiffe-dono... I'm... at a loss for words about how to describe this any further...