|Reviews for Denial|
| CH chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
| Callista Wolfwood chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
| charmeddestiny chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
That was beautiful. I only wish the writers for Smallville had your creativity.
I loved it. Keep up the amazing work.
| nancy chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
i thought this was a great story idea. it was very well written and i loved it!
| point blank chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
aw...that's kinda sad
| 1eclecticreader chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
Well done! Interesting twist you had included in their story. I loved its straight-forwardness and simplcity. Great job!
| Ashley chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow, cool concept. Defenitely intriguing, and very well written.
| deanine chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
This is an interesting flip-flop of cannon. It's a strict Lois POV with a good balance to thoughts and description.
Constructive comment: Nothing major jumped out at me as far a grammar or characterization. You use present tense, and while I've toyed with it in fics before, I find it challenging to write with well, and to enjoy reading. That said, you pull off the present tense. I didn't spot any tense jumping.
| msredux chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Have you thought abput writing a sequel?
| namjai chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
An intriguing AU idea - but you managed to make it fit with canon, too. Another good story!
| Joanna chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
I've read about this possibility once before and that time was disappointing and cliched. you had the best characterization and naration of this event. the story is very good
| ForeverTom chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
I'm not a Clois shipper (I'm just a Clark lover) but I must say that I like your Lois much better than the one on the show. She's a more mature, more human, more caring person. I loved that she cared for Clark when she saw him, sobbing and in pain,in the phone booth.
Yes, I like your Clois. And your writing is very good. Please, post another story soon.
| CindyB chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Very nice! It just screams for a sequel though.
| rhenq chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
your twist on clois made for great reading! i'll definitely read more of your stuff in the future .
| scullymulder chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
OH. MY. GOD!
That was fantastic!
I know this is only a one-shot, but it could totally turn into a fabulous AU chapter story! (Ah, how one can dream!)
I look forward to reading more of your stories!