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As per usual, it was a favorite! I loved Usa's huffy teenage angst counteracting against her desperate desire to be like her mother. And as always, the palpable love between mother and daughter, and the "reversed roles" when Usa protects Serenity was AWESOME! Nice, original plotline.

This was a good story. I like it alot. Well done.

Hello hello!

I wonder if you're getting annoyed with me yet...

Who doesn't love some mother and daughter action! I love it when these two team up, it only brings about greatness. Shinrin has some major issues, which is an interesting idea, because I always thought Senshi were just naturually nice people...but power does corrupt...tricky tricky Serenity, making Shinrin think she can't use her power, its just so classic. I hope there will be more Usa and Serenity fics in the future_

I Love The Story!

yeah this story was really great :D

why dont you write a second adventure about the queen and the princess ;3

oh well i just cant wait to read you other fics then

It's already finished? Pity.

But it was a good way to 'end' it. What I like is how you're able to leave always open possibilities, and other stories to go on -or begin-.

Well, untill next story!

While I was hoping for Ves-Ves to get a high score, I like the way it turned out. It's nice to see someone still do a bad job even with perseverance. Makes it more realistic. Very nice touch.

Besides, she has better grades than the queen did, so that should make her happy. _

And I liked the line about Serenity's nose growing longer. _

You always write the greatest stories, you know that?

Okay! From now on, you're my goal! One of these days, I'll be able to write just as well as you. Then I'll write better than you. Then, one day, I'll get my book published.

Provided I think of a decent beginning, end, and a way to connect the various ideas I have into something coherant and exciting.

~C-chan

well, I really enjoyed this story and shirin was crazy LOL, but I knew she couldn't take the crystal and It would be nice if one day down the line the two queens went on a mission or something.

And I must say it was good to actually "see" that Rini learned a lesson. You showed it by having her comfort Ves-Ves with her mother words and also by her trying her hand at drawing again. These are the things (for me) that slowly can make me see her in a new light.

That was great. Maybe one day Shrinn will be a good friend and ally, not to mention a great protector of her people.

It looks like Usa and Ves Ves both learned something valuable as well.

I look forward to your next story. Maybe something like I dunno Setsuna teaming with the Asteroid Senshi for a mission. One thing though, maybe you could write Setsuna as being maybe a little less stiff and formal.

Theres a thought, have Sets teaming with Palla Palla for a bit.

Good job! Another wonderful Neo-moon story by the talented Bill K. Keep em' coming. _

~Chocolate Wolfie

Usa gained a new power. Go girl!

And the best is yet to come... -thanks to the Author-

Well, chap 11, very good and believe it or not I'm happy to see that she (rini) has gained a new power! Yes the power of love where they are concerned is very strong!

and Loved the Rei, and Amara moment two of my favs...actually they all are favs(smiles) oh boy can't wait to see the family fight together!

Great chapter! You did a good job with the action scenes, and the character-driven scenes as well. It's great that Sailor Moon is able to save the day, and that Endymion arrived in time to help out. I can't wait to read what happens next!

WOW I'm glad ChibiUsa Managed to ascened to the next level and Endymion showed up when he did! I can't wait for more! UpdatesooN!