Reviews for Liar
xImStillFlyx chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Bah! I almost got teary eyed in the end! You should make a sequel, like of Brago actually finding out her secret! Would be very interesting!
UnbornHope chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
*cling* I laughed at the end, a reaction to my sudden understanding of where she went. Usually I'm quite good with these foreshadowing things, but I did not quite suspect her getting an abortion. It was slightly sad... but I loved How sudtley you wrote this.
SetInSmoke chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Oh. My. Gosh. So tell me if I got this right, Sherry was PREAGNET(SP)? oh. my. gosh. anyways good story keep up the good work!
an InuHanyou by birth chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
-gasps- She's pregnant...or was and that is why she had to have a break ;.;

I can see it now.

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Sherry: Brago, I need a break

Brago: No

Sherry: EH? but we've been traveling for weeks and no Mamodo!

Brago: You want to take a break. Fine. But tell me why we had to have one the last time.

Sherry's eyes widen and she looks down.

Brago: Well?

Sherry: I was...we would have...

Brago: Stop studdering and spit it out woman!

Sherry: I was pregnant!

Brago's eyes widen and his mouth hangs open a little bit

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;_;
TooManyGoodCharacters143 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Another great one from you. The sad thing about this is that many of the reviews say that they want a sequel, but they don't realise that the story is already over and that this isn't the normal type of romance fic...Great job with the writing, you really seem to think about how the characters would act in these situations.
mysticalone chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
OMG! That was awesome! You should totally continue it, or make a sequel were Braggo finds out Sherrie's secret!
Sweatshirt Shiro chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
HOLY #%! DID SHE GET AN ABORTION!
eclair and dextera chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
good story,
AnimeWhore666DOOM chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
wait...did she get an abortion? how sad! and that damn Brago. why cant he understand females? you must make either a sequel or more chapters please!
omg taco chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
wow thats great!
jessica chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
i know im going to hell for this but it was good and dont understand where your going with this
Casey chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Oh My Gosh!

This is the first Zatch Bell fanfia I've and...

I LOVE IT!

Make a sequel...

That would be so cool...
Never Ending Illusions chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Hey! This is a really good story... _ Took me by surprise at the end, wow...:)
HalfDemonInuyas chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
The story seems incompleate, will you finish it?

or is it ment to not have a compleate ending?

you have 1 error in this piece
Animeandcartoon chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I hope it wasn't a one shot! This is a good one.
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