Reviews for Sustained Black
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23/2014
The ending was completely adorable!
I think Yukishould have kissed him on the cheek then left the room!
Yuhime Hana chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
I loved this! It was amazing! In my opinion, the characters were perfectly matched with their personalities:) especially Black Haru. I loved this story because of how perfectly in character he was. Hilarious, sexy and awesome. Great job. -claps-
ludicrousLemon chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
I think this is absoloutely hilarious ans cute and sexy and I wouldn't have it any other way :3
Lady Abernathy Wordsmith chapter 4 . 3/8/2011
*Drools then giggles* "Why don't you watch porn with me?" that is going to be stuck in my head all day! Oh my god this is waaaaaay awesome! It makes me wish that Black haru and White haru were twin's instead of a Yami/Yugi type scenario. Oh god...Twincest! Haru having Anal sex with haru...Oh Yuki, you effing, lucky bastard! Give in already! I love the ending through, all sweet and fluffy and innocent...y'know, except for the fact that haru's naked and Yuki's hand is on his hip. But still! It takes a great writer to find a way to make something wayy K-rated with Bare-back Bishies! For some reason, i think that the tatto would be like, the cartooned rat they show in the anime and manga cut pages. But every time i try to imagine a cool-looking, detailed snarling rat, i end up thinking 'That's to mean and nasty to represent Yuki, tone it down a little..." And it always become something like the cartoon in an onsen or eating a rice ball or something. I hope to see more of you writing, Case-saaaaaan!
KatzLite chapter 4 . 9/2/2010
That was hilarious lol. In it's on way, of course. Nice job. I was sad to see it end so soon though.
Krytical chapter 4 . 12/6/2009
Oh wow. I was laughing the whole time. The though of Yuki and Kyo watching gay porn together killed me.
Len chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
Oh, this so wins for humour and innuendo :love:

This was perfect, going from the sad but funny tattoo to the creepy but funny with Kisa and Hiro. Ayame was just hilarious as was Haru's every interaction with, well... anyone :)

This story *defines* 'rated for black Haru'.

Totally going to see what else you've written, cause damn.
Cherrytoast chapter 4 . 6/26/2009
I love this! It's one of my favourite fanfics EVER! I love the idea, the way it's written, the way everyone's involved! And Haru is so hot! (I read this ages ago, but lost it, but I've found it again!) I hope you write more of black Haru! :)
MochaCocaFan chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Completely and totally awesome!
Lil Blue J chapter 4 . 11/13/2007
The ending is so sweet, and the way this fan fiction was written was absolutely incredible! Your writing style really flows, and it's easy to read. I enjoyed every word of this story. The characters were kept canon, which is something I really appreciate in a fan fiction. I got cramps from laughing so much. Overall, I just really, really love this story.
lyke oh snap chapter 4 . 11/4/2007
*sqee* I adore this fic! x]
Think Chocolate Thoughts chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
Aww! I really like it ;D
ayame salo chapter 4 . 7/27/2007
that was frickin awesome. nice job. i even liked the end, which i usually don't with most fanfics. it was a good place to stop.
Bex chapter 4 . 11/25/2006
Man! You're writing is so amazing! (ok I sound like a crazed fangirl *sigh* it's downhil;l from here isn't it?) I love your style of writing, and you're plots, if not original, are supurbly (?) carried out. well done, you are an amazing author

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tomoya-542002 chapter 4 . 10/17/2006
i couldn't stop thinking "omg, poor hiro and kisa!" not doubt they got the worse of it. i like this fic.
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