Reviews for Off The Map
Ponchygirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Dang I'm not sure what to say...this was really good, and interesting. Some of it made no sense, like the end what's that ladies problem? A lot of the time a painting isn't exactly the way it happened, its hard to explain though...I just confused myself and had a moment of staring at the screen blankly hopefully my review makes sense. This was overall a great story! ;)
TitoM an chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
liked the story it was very interesting
DaynaWayna chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Wow. Spooky. The 'snippet' style of writing was intriguing to me... you learn bits and pieces as the years pass. And you used the "CHiPs '99" theme of Ponch leaving the force then coming back... and it worked. Ponch always was "looking for trouble" and trying to make things right. I like how you portrayed him here. (I'm a Jon Baker fan myself and I missed him in this story, but it wasn't about Jon now, was it? LOL)

The way you have described the routes never going to Sunnydale reminded me of "Eureka" for some reason. Probably because it's a spooky little town with its own secrets, too. I loved how you described the town as "the CHP's garbage disposal." Very graphic, yet incredibly simple.

I know very little about the Buffy-verse, so I don't know if Sunnydale falling into caves is you or canon, but I like the 2004 bit at the end. Don't know who the blonde is, sadly, but it was a very interesting twist that she knew exactly how it happened. Overall, an interesting read. :)
Dragonhulk chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
This is so wrong, but funny.
Majin Gojira chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Another unique crossover, and a subtle one at that. Well done!
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
oh this was cool! you should write more of it!
goddessa39 chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Hm... don't whatch Chips. But this was nice.
Dlgood chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Ooh, this was very very cool.
HecatonchiresLM chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Cool. Nice sunnydale through the ages feel. (even if its only 30 years)