Reviews for Marathon the Assualt
assassingao chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Well, good starting, but there are some paragraph that looked like a bunch of several sentences, I suggest break it up.

Also, It is sad to say this, but instead of " you were supposed to type in, it came as some symbol.

So, you'd have to preview it after submitted it to make sure.(I did several times on my fic on chapter one, I'm going to use .txt now...)

Storyline's interesting...

Submit another chapter already!
Marine chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I liked it. Marathon is pretty old game but its good that someone still write stories about it :) I hope that you update this soon.