|Reviews for The Tragic Flaw|
| chikichiki chapter 7 . 6/15/2005
aww... :33... keep writing! ]
| koalacancan chapter 7 . 6/15/2005
| whatsername104 chapter 7 . 6/15/2005
please update soon! i wanna read more! it's so good!
| OneVoice714 chapter 6 . 6/15/2005
This story is off to a great start, can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
| chikichiki chapter 6 . 6/14/2005
oh wow, i just imagine that ice in between them.. *shiver*..
and omg, i love that word, delicately... *whee*.. :3 keep writing! ]
| passionflower24 chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
i can't believe this has so little reviews! It's really good, sometimes i think you write lily a little *too* obsessive and rude, but otherwise the characterisations are good! I like the realistic aspect of james and Sirius getting into a fight over what i'm assuming is the werewolf incident... shouldn't remus be annoyed too ? hehe well anyways i hope lily finds out the truth and apologises... good story.. i look forward to te update! :)
| KatrinaRayne chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Hi, darling! The first chapter of this story is amazing! I love the dialogue and the way it's written. There are a few grammatical errors, but it's no big deal. I have to go on and read the next few chapters now!
| jess squared chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
Oh, I am very much enjoying this. Nice job. :)
It's fun to see someone's idea of the teenaged James and Lily's relationship. Very engaging story, and you write quite well.
I used to have a calico, too. Years and years ago when I was little.. I barely rember her.. I think I was 3 when we lost her.
| chikichiki chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
ooh, james is furious.. xD
| chikichiki chapter 4 . 6/13/2005
oh how cutee a calico?.. i don't have a cat period.. xD
aww, lily's a stubborn little flower.. P.. keep writing! :]
| chikichiki chapter 3 . 6/12/2005
whoaa, another update? awesome.. xD.. aw, i want a cheshire cat... :33
| chikichiki chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
aw! lily has no picture of james? poop.. xD.. keep writing! ]
| chikichiki chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
not bad..not bad at all! :D .. im looking forward to your next chapter so keep writing! ]