Reviews for Poisoned |
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reveileb maerdyad chapter 1 . 10/21/2005 arianne! miss na kita! at miss ko na rin ang fanfiction. i think this is the first of your work na nabasa ko na may narration, at kahit wala akong ni isang kaalam-alam sa bleach (may kinalaman ba to sa tide, at ariel with energizers? hehe. wenk.), i really like this. you managed to capture attention sa kaiksian. swak, kumbaga. loved the angst, though i really really wish i could relate with the story more, hehe. (apir) |
notnow chapter 1 . 10/19/2005 It's strange but there were parts I really liked and parts that I didn't at all. I love all the italicized parts as well as the dialogue. Really great, emotional lines. I didn't like the regular narrative parts though. Not because it was written in 1st person but because it made me skeptical whether Ichigo would sound like that in his thoughts. "the window's always open." was really great. |
firecloak chapter 1 . 7/25/2005 The part where you mentioned the window was awesome. Very nice fanfic. |
Sasina chapter 1 . 6/13/2005 Nice. I like it. |
Nekare chapter 1 . 6/13/2005 wonderfull. I really, really liked it, and your metaphores are amazing. I especially loved the ending line, it has so much feeling in it...sighs. nice work |
Tenkaichi chapter 1 . 6/13/2005 Nice, cute fic. I would suggest that you put the warning for spoiler ch181 in the summary page before one actually clicks on the story, because the first part isn't far down enough on the page to be concealed. That's a big big spoiler for anyone who's in the Soul Society arc. :) |
Ringo Nonohara chapter 1 . 6/12/2005 So bittersweet.. xD Love it! x3 Especially the part about the window always being opened... I just hope Ichigo won't catch a cold in the winter.. '' |