Good story.. (very) well written.. interesting concepts.. I find myself glad/hoping you'll continue writing - it's been a pleasure reading; that's for sure. IM(NS?)HO, I'd think it well and fine to use the manga; depending on the facts you reference, you might just have to find a way to tell the readers what happened in the backstory..

Thanks for sharing the story.

yeah, this is great! As for your other doubts you should put them a side. I love this fanfic, and you know the bad thing about this is that I haven't actually ever seen the show. I just saw a preview of it, but after reading this I'm definitly going to remedy that problem. Oh and I hope you post some more stories about Ushio and Toro soon. I will definitly make it a point to read it.

Continue! Continue! It's to good to stop now!

Damn. Every good fic I start reading seems to end inna cliffhanger nowadays.

Now, will the Kemono no Yari _still_ transform ushio in some way?

No worries, this is great so you can go as many chapters as you want. Please continue soon!

i don't know how u r going 2 wrap this up in 1 more chapter. in fact if u can't or even if u just want 2 write a 2nd story with this by line i am all 4 it. u r really good. thanks 4 the tale. can hardly wait 4 the next part.c ya. z.

i forgot 2 mention earlier that i got a kick out of the jabberwockey referance, in the title. this tale just gets better and better. thanks. z.

oh my god.

this was just wonderful. i love the way u weave the story together. next 2 blueseed, ushio and tora have long ben my favorite. this is the best fanfic i have ever read about them. gotta go read the next chapter now. c ya soon. z.

I really, really liked your fanfic and I can't wait till you release Ch. 5

This is fantastic. I have never seen this show, but I still know what is going on in this fic. Nice description. Great Job! Dratini! "Get back in your pokeball!"

Great story! looking forward to the rest of it.

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!1 I'm just curious but the idea for Ushio to be a black bakemono, Tora-look-alike, did that come from a character in the manga named Garo or something along the line?