Reviews for Odaiba Memorial Day
Polymoly chapter 15 . 1/11
One of the best grown-up version of Digi-destined yet.

I simply applaud you for making a story that was both unpredictable, and realistic at the same time. You made me anticipating the reunion more and more after reading each chapters! I only recently had read Digimon fics right after Tri came up last year... And your story definitely satisfy the ending that was never quite satisfying in my part.

Of course, my favorite story was Taiora. And to be honest, I was actually only reading their chapters to be with. But then, your writing just made me curious to read all of the characters' stories and thus... 24 hours later, here I am, lol. And honestly, I didn't expect Chi to be Tai's when you planted the idea in ch12. Damn, that one caught me. I was so fixated on the plot of their affair and of course, waiting for you to get Tai and Sora together, that I didn't really consider how unjust their affair was. But in the end, Tareshi was a good call. He was the right thing to do, even though there is a small part of me that really wants Taiora to fruit. But Chi was good enough. One thing I didn't quite like with this ending, was Tai's own happy ending. He was so engrossed with his affair with Sora that you didn't really touch on how his life was treating him. I am a big Tai rooter so it pained me to see him not doing anything significant with his life (I know they're fiction but I just care too much, lol). Anyway, I love the depth of their story the most, so bravo.

Call me a pessimist, but I really thought your take on TK and Kari's was appropriate. I kinda hate how everyone on FF was writing on the perfection of Takari relationship. And here, you just show the reality that being an adult is a struggle, and not everyone can have a happily ever after just because they've found someone. Davis' side of the story was also a good read. He had always been the 'wheel' of the gang, but I always thought he deserved better. You made that happen in this story.

Anyways, if I don't stop now, I'll probably write an essay about all the stories.. Since I love them all. But know that your story definitely inspired me and I thank you for making such an amazing piece! Goodluck with your life and till next time!

-polymoly
rakikel chapter 15 . 11/10/2015
A nice story! I liked the way you designed the plot: points of view that slowly built antecipation and everything tied up in the reunion. It worked out really well :)
One thing i must say: i find it really hypocritical of yolei and kentaru's part to judge Tai. I'm not defending him, but kentaru dropped many hints when tai was with sora; if it was something so terrible in his eyes, he could've stayed silent. Was he testing Tai? If it's the case, that means he was not a real friend, and maybe you planned it this way. About yolei: i never really liked her. I understand she is kind of fighter, but, well, didn't have my sympathy. The ken-izzy confusion: she did have her share of guilt. The fiasco of her marriage: izzy was terrible, but she did cheat on him. Did she misunderstood tai's situation, thought he took advantage of sora? Is she transferring her anger from what's-his-name to tai? In any case, it doesn't change the fact that she made a mistake, and, like it or not, didn't respect her own vows. But again: maybe you planned it this way, because in life you do have to deal with your share of hypocritcal people.

Sorry for any grammar mistakes.
OnceUponAnOriginal chapter 15 . 9/3/2015
I liked this, bittersweet in a way, and you kept me hooked from the start. Thank you for writing it :) PS, that guest reviewer needs to tone it WAY down.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Also, no! Tk and Kari do NOT hook up at the end! TK certainly doesn't deserve to get the girl when Tai didn't, so get a life! Takari don't hook up and they are NOT canon, so grow up! Also, STOP BASHING DAVIS YOU SHIT!God I hate assholes like you who don't appreciate the better characters! Tai and Davis are the best! They don't deserve the crap you little bastards give them! Get a life you simple minded fool!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Well I can tell this will be a shit story! Since you have that shitty Sorato in it! As well as that, you have that sickening Takari! You're one sicko you know that! If you're going to put in couples that are canon, then fine, but Takari was NOT SODDING CANON! And the sooner you Takari freaks realise that the sodding better! Get a life and stop writing shit stories! I'm not even giving this story a chance since you've already said the main ending couples are shitty Sorato and Takari! Two of the worst pairings in the history of Digimon! Or I should say TEH worst pairings! Psycho!
nequam-tenshi chapter 15 . 8/15/2011
A very bittersweet story overall! So much drama!
Angelfish369 chapter 9 . 1/11/2011
I especially like this chapter due to the situation Joe's in. All the other characters had some obvious major problems. With Joe, his life is like what most people's would be. Comfortable routine, the knowledge that they are lucky, yet something is still missing. But at the same time they won't do anything to change the situation.
Angelfish369 chapter 2 . 1/9/2011
Interesting. I am very curious as to what happened to everybody. It's late now so I'll finish reading later. Can't wait!
fireangel08 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Interesting...just the 1st chapter and I'm already hooked on. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happened to the rest of the digi-destined.
Phoenixbinary chapter 15 . 3/25/2008
Great Work I loved every chapter and every twist, amazing how the story ties up in the end. I LOVE ALL YOU'RE STORIES!
PatrioticPuppy chapter 15 . 7/1/2007
Well, this has to be one of the most well-written 02 fics I have ever read. I loved how everyone's past was explained, how everything kind of slid together in the end. The ending wasn't perfect, but that was what made it incredibly satisfying. This is definitely going on my favorites.

-Puppy
nerdynovelist11 chapter 15 . 5/19/2007
wow.

that's all i can say. this was amazing. i am a taiora fan, but i must say, i loved how you ended it! I just couldn't see her leaving him either, but i like how things are at least okay between them now.

this fic was definitely worth spending 2 and a half hours to read!

thanks for the great read!

awesome work!
Through Darkness chapter 15 . 1/18/2007
The best digimon fanfiction I have ever read.

One of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read.

Congratulations.

-

Through Darkness and Light /x\
MiniBerry chapter 5 . 12/11/2006
A. I love this story, yes.

B. Taiorato...abandoned? Because after all these years, I am still miserable about that ending. Make me feel better please...
Apocali chapter 15 . 12/10/2005
Well I have to say that this story great. I like that you ended in a somewhat happy ending which I find more realistic. I also like it that you didn't leave it too ,I also liked that you made Tareshi a nice guy because if he wasn't it would ruin the whole conflict between Sora and was an interesting story, great job!
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