Reviews for Seemingly Harmless Glass of Water
loha chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Go see a sycologist
Reana chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
The preview wasn't working when I posted this, but as soon as I saw the underlining, I tried to fix it. I still can't get the link to post, but here it is:
Anony chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Happy 200!
seabiscuit0810 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Very deep story, I hope Cacoethes doesn't end like that. Some girl at school did that last year, so I'm guessing some people can relate to what happened in the poem. Not me, but others probably can.
yayalulu chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Whoa,deep. As usual Reana, you've continued your standard of excellence.
Reading Redhead chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Eek. Okay, hoping that's not where Cacoethes goes. But it's a lovely poem, and I enjoyed the scheme. Just a note on formatting - the entire poem's underlined, was that what you were intending? I see you've updated Cacoethes, too, so I'm off to read that!

Terrasina Dragonwagon chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Dude, I remember that. It was strange.

Oh. This is freaky. Similar to a sestina, no? VERY awesome. I'm creeped.
Sakiina chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
I like it! The scheme and the words... I'm thinking it was hard to write so that it made sense but repeated; rather impressive.

I wish the http link were there though - and is the underlining intentional or a result of forgotten closing tags?