Such a shame this was never completed I really enjoyed this. I enjoy your style of writing some of your stories are my favourite Luke and Mara stories. I hope one day you return and complete this. Thank you so much for sharing this, it truly is an amazing story and true to the characters and to Star Wars. I love Luke and Maras characters in this.

Such a shame that this story has been dead 16 years as of March 6, 2024. Are you still alive?

man i still love this story, this could have been my favorite Mara Jade portrayal its so good but very unfinished i'd even settle for bullet point about what would have happened

Well done on a great story line and characterisation. It's a huge pity you could not finish the story. Hopefully you'll get to it someday. Thanks

Fuuuck this fic is amazing, i know it's really been nearly 15 years since you last updated...

I hope someday in future you will continue it!

The little palpatine moment you had there with the unarmed man chair come strike me down, very poor form Luke. I forgot how trolly Luke could get in the books.

I'm still sad this hasn't been finished! Any chance of that?

Solid work. It’s a shame that it stopped here but thanks for what you did write.

Love this story and it’s sad that you didn’t finish it. Still enjoyed it very much, thanks. :)

Really great story with which I've just caught up-12 years too late or so it would seem. Given the incredibly long absence I assume you'll not pick this back up but it would be wonderful if you did. No SI's f'cking things up, very solid universe building, not an overage of drama, great plot (even if it loosly follows one of the canons) and solid writing/great grammar. Thanks loads for your hard work on this. It would be atreat if you ever pick it up again.

As much as I'm enjoying Luke's altered journey, I'm glad to see you aren't forgetting Han and Leia.

I really liked the imagery of those last few lines.

What a shame you never finished this story..

And then... 4 months later... I actually see it hasn’t been updated in 10 years.

After giving this a re-read I am reminded how good a writer she is, and how good a story this is. I just hope Ash is still around and if so, would it be possible to have this story finished. Thanks.