Reviews for Deltora Heir
mysticaljayne chapter 5 . 5/28/2014
ACTION! I like how you had the baby born in the wilderness, and also the ties to Jasmine's own birth. Nice read.
HovaStrider chapter 5 . 3/4/2014
Your ending seems rushed.
CatLover444 chapter 5 . 1/17/2014
Very sweet!
minamurra chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
Perfect ending
minamurra chapter 2 . 10/7/2013
minamurra chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Luv the pic :)
Crystal Silvera chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
I liked this . . . will there be a sequel? I saw that you won't be writing for a bit, it was up on your profile. I hope you get writing soon! Your DQ&RoR crossover is really good too, by the way. :D
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2012
b-r-i-t-t-a-n-y-y-y-y-y-y-y chapter 5 . 11/24/2011
really good!

the only bad thing about it that i found is that it didnt go for long enough!

i got so devastated at the end coz it was over!
Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
to short, but very good all the same
zeke manson chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
it was very good thank's
Icksha chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
minor point it may be. its the forest of silence not the forest of fear.
Icksha chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
All in all, great so far. I do love certain parts, such as the plans within plans, straight from the book. Very well thought out. My one complaint is Jasmin seemed to comfortable in the castle. Other than that it was very true to the characters]
7-12m3 chapter 5 . 4/22/2008
ok but could be better longer plot mostly
snakeboy33 chapter 5 . 2/9/2008
I am impressed, and with these short stories, I am hard to impress.
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