Reviews for A Twist in the Game |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey could you recommend some Fred/Hermy fics i only found a good one it was the one you wrote. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am sorry but that could have been better i liked it but it could've been better. make up for the poorly written one write a sequel! no seriously i loved this one but it is to rushed you need to a)rewrite with more detail and/or explanation b) write a sequel and put some flashbacks in there because you really didn't go into detail about ginny and blaise and if you weren't going to go into detail about them some time or another you should have just not said anything about them at all. i liked though and this to me was not complete there are possibilities here i mean endless for the Blaise/Ginny thing and what happens after Fred and Hermione get married do they have kids do Blaise and Ginny get married i need to know! i still thought it was awesome. no disrepects, Sariah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this! Fred's a good guy, and I'm into the Fred/Hermione pairing. This is only the first one I've read though. You just might want to edit some spelling and grammar, and your last two chapters were amazingly short. However, it was very good nonetheless. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was short but sweet. i do like the ending. that last line is something to remember. Jinger. |
![]() ![]() this is so good i luv it plz go on!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story however i have one comment. wasnt hermione's middle name scarlett? if so, why when fred proposed was it tiara? Otherwise i liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw so cute and a happy ending! YAY |
![]() ![]() that was a wonderful fanfic! _ i loved it! you're a great writer! write more! |
![]() ![]() YAY! i was given a thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it over or is there more? |
![]() ![]() very good. At least she listens to some decent bands... |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW i wish my b/f was the sweet! is there more? i loved it so much! and we won't get to the fact that i total sad person |
![]() ![]() Write more! write more! PLEASE? |