Reviews for Flawed
Facade15 chapter 6 . 3/17
Though I suspect you won't be updating this, it having been 10 years and all, I figured I'd let you know that I like it anyway. I consider HP x-overs very hit-and-miss, but you were doing well. I particularly liked the way you wrote Yuusuke. And Hiei. And just the story in general, really.
lDragonElf chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
Are you going to continue with this story? It's very good so far.
Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
I see a flaw in the basis of the plot - Yusuke, and every other demon of significance still around at this point, can simply run to a wizard, snap their wand in two and be back before anyone realized they had even moved.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
One of, if not the best YYH/HP crossovers I've ever read, and it's a deadfic with 6 lousy chapters. Are your dropped stories up for adoption? That way there's at least hope it'll be continued.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
Boggart. Rowling used them as a plot device. Fanfic writers in general use them for A) exposition about a transplanted character's worst fears and B) angst. You used it for sheer utter scary, on account of guess what Yusuke's worst fear is? (Hint: he's descended from a man-eating demon.)
tsukinopen chapter 6 . 12/7/2011
too bad the plot didn't start yet!
tsukinopen chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
lol dumbledore should use watakushi or something
gemiinous chapter 6 . 8/10/2011
...i'm sad now...i shouldnt have read this and gotten my hopes up! *pouts*
silverfairy chapter 6 . 5/19/2011
Wow! This is a good story, one of the few good YYHxHP crossovers I've read.

Sadly, I think it's discontinued DX

Please update soon, judging by the reviews, I think a lot will celebrate if story gets an update.
Robin Autumn chapter 6 . 5/13/2011
Yes it's been six years since you've updated. Yes this is probably abandoned, just like Mission X. But yes, I am reviewing anyways, in the vain hope that you will find renewed interest in this story. :) Cause I really like it!
BeyondMyReach chapter 6 . 4/20/2011
Beautifully written. It's truly a pity that you're not going to continue this fic. I would have enjoy seeing the egg hatching.
starkmaddness chapter 6 . 7/19/2010
Its pretty rare to find crossover fics, but even rarer to find ones that are written seriously and executed with believable character interactions and plot (instead of crossover crackfics just blown out of an author's ass for laughs, though those are fun to read also). If you ever decide to continue this story, I'll be one reader willing and giddy to review, because this fanfiction is nothing short of aMAZING! And #($& (*#$ it's so exciting to read the yu yu hakusho and HP universe colliding and GAAAAAAAAAAAH~~! I was practically giggling and slapping myself in euphoria reading it! Thank you for writing this~
Phamtom of the Pie chapter 6 . 6/22/2010
This is one of the best I've read! I picked up on a few minor mistakes, but otherwise the writing flows well and the characterization's great. I know it's useless to say, but I really do hope you haven't given up on this story.
Vuurvlieg chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
Ow man, awesome. It's about time Yusuke started acting like himself again, being helpless doesn't suit him. I like the hint to how much Yusuke trusts Hiei. The fact that he is allowed to look into his head. I'm kinda missing Hiei and Kurama in this one. Understandable that they can't come (especially Hiei since he is a full demon) but I mis them even as I read the story. It's been a (long) wile but can I wine about more updates?
KuroAngelique chapter 6 . 2/27/2010
Oh god I love this. This is one amazing fic.

I do hope you'll update this; it's too awesome to be abandoned.
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