Reviews for Flawed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is so well written and nicely paced. It’s great! |
![]() ![]() Continue! Continue!:) U said that it was to be continued! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though I suspect you won't be updating this, it having been 10 years and all, I figured I'd let you know that I like it anyway. I consider HP x-overs very hit-and-miss, but you were doing well. I particularly liked the way you wrote Yuusuke. And Hiei. And just the story in general, really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to continue with this story? It's very good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see a flaw in the basis of the plot - Yusuke, and every other demon of significance still around at this point, can simply run to a wizard, snap their wand in two and be back before anyone realized they had even moved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of, if not the best YYH/HP crossovers I've ever read, and it's a deadfic with 6 lousy chapters. Are your dropped stories up for adoption? That way there's at least hope it'll be continued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boggart. Rowling used them as a plot device. Fanfic writers in general use them for A) exposition about a transplanted character's worst fears and B) angst. You used it for sheer utter scary, on account of guess what Yusuke's worst fear is? (Hint: he's descended from a man-eating demon.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() too bad the plot didn't start yet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol dumbledore should use watakushi or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...i'm sad now...i shouldnt have read this and gotten my hopes up! *pouts* |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is a good story, one of the few good YYHxHP crossovers I've read. Sadly, I think it's discontinued DX Please update soon, judging by the reviews, I think a lot will celebrate if story gets an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes it's been six years since you've updated. Yes this is probably abandoned, just like Mission X. But yes, I am reviewing anyways, in the vain hope that you will find renewed interest in this story. :) Cause I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written. It's truly a pity that you're not going to continue this fic. I would have enjoy seeing the egg hatching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its pretty rare to find crossover fics, but even rarer to find ones that are written seriously and executed with believable character interactions and plot (instead of crossover crackfics just blown out of an author's ass for laughs, though those are fun to read also). If you ever decide to continue this story, I'll be one reader willing and giddy to review, because this fanfiction is nothing short of aMAZING! And #($& (*#$ it's so exciting to read the yu yu hakusho and HP universe colliding and GAAAAAAAAAAAH~~! I was practically giggling and slapping myself in euphoria reading it! Thank you for writing this~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best I've read! I picked up on a few minor mistakes, but otherwise the writing flows well and the characterization's great. I know it's useless to say, but I really do hope you haven't given up on this story. |