|Reviews for The Fox and the Falling Man|
| Roisin Dubh chapter 8 . 8/13/2005
As always, I've enjoyed this chapter. Your writing style remains very visual, which is perfect for anime because it allows me to visualize the story very well.
There are a few places where words run together... don't know if that is your original stuff or just some fluke thing that happened when got a hold of it. But you might want to check for that.
| Roisin Dubh chapter 7 . 8/13/2005
| School of Hard Knocks chapter 8 . 8/11/2005
Gracias for the review note.I always wondered why Chihuahua,MX was called that name but i never found out ese keep on truckin homes.
| Roisin Dubh chapter 6 . 7/16/2005
Great chapter title, and the "basilisk glare" was a great image.
Your descriptions remain excellent. I can see in my head how this would play out on a TV screen and for this genre, that's great.
| School of Hard Knocks chapter 6 . 7/16/2005
They say sleep is the cousin of death so my eyes wide open been up all night drinking some coronas and trying to update my keep writing ese.
| Flak chapter 5 . 7/7/2005
I have to say this is a really great story thus far. I don't review often -mainly because I'm lazy- but I felt that this merited me getting off my ass and logging in to comment.
We rarely see high quality writing, but this is well done. No mistakes, an easy flow, and comfortable wording fit together to make this story a pleasure to read. Add to that the fact that it's interesting, and you have a great story! Please keep it up.
| Roisin Dubh chapter 5 . 7/4/2005
Still intrigued so far. Hope you've had a good 4th... I'm going to recommend this to some of my friends here on I'm not sure if they're in to this style, but I'll send them your way...
| School of Hard Knocks chapter 5 . 7/3/2005
Hey keep going with the story.
| Roisin Dubh chapter 4 . 7/2/2005
Liking this a whole lot. Pacing and descriptions are still really good, and you're adding just enough hooks to make me want to know more about Kitsune and what's really going on...
Hope to see more chapters soon!
| Roisin Dubh chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
It has been a long time since I've really followed anything in this genre, and I really like how you give a little background on your character in order to allow readers who aren't familiar with the character and her background to get involved in the story.
I've read other anime/manga stories that just dump the reader into a complicated mess and I haven't been able to make sense of them. Your's is much more inviting to the novice.
You also strike a nice balance with using intelligent sophisticated vocabulary in many areas (something I should pay more attention to in my own stories), and that is refreshing as well.
All in all excellent start and very, very well written.
Hopefully I can get back over the long weekend and read the rest of your chapters!
| Kurosawa Seiji chapter 4 . 6/24/2005
whoo, boy! this was something! who knew that kei liked it rough, eh? and mitsune... she definetly takes the cake with this one!
truly funny stuff, can't wait for more... update soon, ne?
well, i'm off...
| NaruFlip chapter 4 . 6/24/2005
Well written. Very descriptive and colorful. Like the Steve character. Kitsune is not my favorite of Hinata cast, but a fun story to read. The whole think w/ Kei is kinda scary. LOL. Keep up the good work.
| Kurosawa Seiji chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
well... the story is intriguing, albeit not too interesting... although that's to expect, since these chapters were more like introductory ones for your character (i guess)...
anyways, good portrayal of mitsune... A gambling, drinking and smoking habits all summed up to cause her, and anyone involved with her, tons of trouble...
one question though, why 'the falling man'?
on a side note, i find it funny that i keep picturing steve as a ten feet tall human muscle, with mitsune barely reaching above his waist level...
also, i can't wait to see the reaction of everyone at the inn towards this human wall that is steve... so, hope you update soon...
well, i'm off...