|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| HealingRose chapter 1 . 2/27
OMg lol this is horrible. i cant read anymore. It had some much potential to
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 10 . 1/27
great is this the ending because it says complete at the top
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 3 . 1/27
just letting you know the Room of Requirement is on the 7th floor not the 3rd
| RakshasaKoneko chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
ok, I have been having some issues with this story. You have a great idea here don't get me wrong, but your flow needs work. Your transitions in the characters need to take some time, you need to slow down a little and work on character development. Xavier slid too easily into the role of a leader, his height it too tall for a 10 year old (even a tall 10 year old). And yes while some people come by the sword naturally, training and footwork need to always be learned.
Your ever watchful reader, Raksha Koneko-chan
| johnny.vick chapter 10 . 2/1/2014
omg omg i love it
| Team Major Whitlock chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
I loved it, please write a sequel x
| Allen's Matchmaker chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
| Mason chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
UPDATE THE STORY YOU SILLY COW
| Obscured Angel chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
The story isn't bad so far, but there are some contradictions in this chapter that I suggest you correct :)
The most prominent one is when Harry/Xavier yells at Ron telling him that his name is Xavier Riddle and a few lines later, Xavier mentions that no one except a select few know his real name.
| LunarCatNinja chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Awesome story! I'm going to read the second part ASAP.
| DarkenedRose24 chapter 10 . 2/7/2013
This is good. Will there be more?
| Flying Chrissy chapter 10 . 9/20/2012
cool story! Is their going to be a sequel?
| Dark-Angel-Princess 01 chapter 10 . 8/4/2012
please update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
It's interesting I read that wit pleasure
| Greypedia chapter 10 . 6/16/2012