Reviews for Ghosts
yuuki24688 chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
Way to tug at my heart strings. Holy cow.
DFDFDFDFDF chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
This is depressing but i commend you for this realistic, though downer, vision.
It would kill me to stay with a woman who said she hates me but then again i'm not Naruto.
That's the only part i don't get. Why? Why put yourself through that?
Anyway , great story!
callmepharisee chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Been reading fanfixtion too long to cry over it anymore, but if I could've cried I would' ve. So sad. This is probably how the manga ends- with one of the three dying.
astoria-paranoia chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
If Sasuke was to die in the manga, this would be exactly like how I'd want it to happen. That exchange between Naruto and Sasuke as he was dying was perfect in every way possible.

Really love how you wrote this piece, the last line concludes it so nicely~ thank you!
Le Lynx des Neiges chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Sad. Very, very sad. I hope they'll arrive to be happy with each other one day - but it feels right that Sasuke is always here, beteween them, because it's where he belongs, right?
ChasingProse chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
foreverloved chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I was going to write something similar to this but it looks like you've beaten me to it. I'm glad you did. You did an amazing job of conveying the heartache and aftereffects of what Sasuke's death will do to them, much better than I could have. Halfway through reading this my heart starting hurting so much I had to stop reading it for a few moment and before trying again.

Absolutely wonderful job on this, thank you so much for writing this one-shot.
KRenee chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I'm sobbing pitifully in my been a long time since someone's reduced me to tears with a fanfic.
In Like Vin chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Wow. That is all.

Except for this: "even now, she knows she’ll never forgive herself for the lie that feels like the truth." BEAUTIFUL
CoalescentDream chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
great fic...sad and well written.
dr. sluice chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Very sad. (
piston heart chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Omf gosh. I remember reading this story, two or three days ago, and, well... It left me speechless. I faved it then, and now, I'm reviewing.

This just totally wrenched at my heart. I'm a fan of NaruSaku, and this just blew my mind. The characterizations were nearly perfect, and I loved how you entailed that Sakura loves Naruto, but just lets him think she hates him, because she sometimes does hate him.

But (because the little note about leaving concrit at the bottom of this window keeps nagging me), you could have made it flow a bit easier. I mean, not make it go orderly, because some of my favorite stories are really fractured, but, somehow, just make it at least foreshadow the next piece, maybe? Sorry. I'm a terrible reviewer, but I had to say that I heartheartheat this story.
tsunderes chapter 1 . 11/23/2007

I remember reading this awhile back, I LOVE this fic so much. I cried the first time I read it and I might cry now. There is nothing I can say more, is it hurts because it so plausible that it might happen. Real in a very...strange way.

Kudos. Definitely faved.
Ame Ulan chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
This was so damn good. You've no idea how happy you've made me. Simply AWESOME. Not only well written, original, and INTERESTING, but it was just... reading this... I could see it happening. This was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Can I say that I love you without sounded stakerish? Or off my rocker?
Essyllus chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Oh man. Naruto's characterization is simply amazing. I love the relationship between Naruto and Sakura, and how hollow they are.
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