Reviews for Free From This Hell Hole
j'j chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
aww so sad!
brie chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Vey well written! Even though Kai dies, it was very supensful and u used alot of forshadowing,I think, to show that he was going to commit suiside and go to a happier the ending was very good too! The maid had understood him and the hell and way his life was going and was.
Clio36250 chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Kai's dead, then?

Katie: No! You can't kill Kai, no!

Ignore her, I think it's good. A tad depressing, but what suicide story isn't?
TatisHiwatari chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Wow, cool poem thing! You should write more of these!
Hisagi's Luv Chibi chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
that is so awsome!
yinyangren chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
u killed him... and he's happy... i would be happy too... XD...
Kaesura chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Wow. Angsty. Well, if it's possible, could you make another chapter including why Kai's so depressed? I mean, even when I get a bit angsty, I usually have a good reason. But other from that, I'd say this has got tons of potential, and is pretty good Kai angst! Oh, and another thing, Dranzer is actually female - I've read the Chinese myths and such. Lol.
lil' angelgrl chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
NO! Why? Why did he have to die! Oh well, it's just a story, right? Well there have been to many bad things here where I live. Well, anywayz, great story it's sad:(