|Reviews for Ever After|
| iheartdonuts chapter 4 . 10/26/2009
Wow, I wish you would update!
Hehe, the plot seems really well and I'm liken your writing style, please write more!
(If you can/may.)
| GrimlockX4 chapter 5 . 1/22/2008
Awesome SSX Tricky story. Good luck on chapter 6.
| Twixles chapter 5 . 12/6/2007
GAH LOVE IT
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 5 . 11/3/2007
Alright! That's the Kaori we know and love. Bubbly and slightly childish. Excellent. Thanks for continuing I thought it would not carry on. Please carry on. I'll keep reading.
| Kaori Nishidake chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
GOING i love that!
| Ashley Jo chapter 5 . 4/28/2007
| poised-geisha chapter 5 . 4/27/2007
yay! you finally updated!
okay so update more soon now ne? jk.
i'm just glad you updated.
| YourSlytherinPrincess chapter 4 . 3/6/2007
Come on, CONTINUE1!
| poised-geisha chapter 4 . 1/1/2007
eh heh heh heh..
i love mac/kaori pairing!
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 4 . 11/12/2006
LOL that was a good ending. i found a couple of spelling mistakes at the beginning of the chapter but apart from that it was great. Keep going.
P.S:By thew way, how come kaori's surname isn't nishidake any more?
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 3 . 11/12/2006
that was a good chapter. keep going with it
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
Wow that explains it all. How sad. anyways keep going i'm definitely hooked on this one
| Burninghammer63088 chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Hm! Very good for a first SSX fic. I like the way you've used japanese words, it makes it authenticly japanese. Keep going. Im interested.
| Ashley Jo chapter 4 . 8/25/2006
| SakuraKChan chapter 2 . 8/13/2006
one suggestion, try to stick with one tense. When you jump from present tense in one sentece to past tense in another, it makes it really hard to read.